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MY FIRST LOVE 1st prize award wining poem African Love for all Awards

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MY FIRST LOVE 1st prize award wining poem African Love for all Awards

My first love
is a whore

but i want her back
because she always had my back

when everyone
threw me back, barked, nagged disappeared 
continuously on me

just because,
i try and cry to make them understand how i feel 
about them

My first love
is a whore

but i want her back
because the love apple, love bite, and her loving 
kindness,
makes me lovesick,
and unloved to other love birds, that promiscuously 
convey my way, 
to convict my heart.

My first love
Is a whore

But I want her back
because she has not false me
but she has inherently taken me the way I am

So I am also readily convinced 
to take her the way she is
into my love life

My first love
Is a whore

But I want her back
for I now known
that those whom I took as the goal keepers of my 
life 'my friends'

Imprisoned my affections for my first love, 
overstretched my suspicion,
and tore my first love's glossy fondness, into 
unscrupulous odiousness

My first love 
Is a whore

but I will become a fishmonger
Just to fishnet her back into my life,

because I truly want back my first love
even if she is going to come back without her love, 
but with her heart

that will serve
Just to see and be with her again

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  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:40:00 AM
    nice poem..congrats!!

    oloidi Avatar femi joey oloidi
    Date: 8/4/2012 1:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awww Mary Paz thankiroooo! Woah! U are such a beauty,I adore your profile picture. Really, your face and smile, is as smooth as the flesh of the stars. Take care beauty!*flowers from me*smile on star. Kingfemi
  1. Date: 8/4/2012 6:45:00 AM
    Beautiful written poem - congrats on your win - have a lovely weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    oloidi Avatar femi joey oloidi
    Date: 8/4/2012 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne Lise , because without you all, I can't win. I learn from you all, this makes you all winners. Thanks, *lot of love* Kingfemi
    oloidi Avatar femi joey oloidi
    Date: 8/4/2012 6:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks mighty David. Kingfemi.
  1. Date: 8/4/2012 4:16:00 AM
    Femi, congrats, I like it...David