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Never Dying Dad

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Never Dying Dad

My smile resembles yours,
Everybody says ;
Not merely my smile,
I think, my sob too does.

When my legs waver
In the sludge,
I see your rope
To climb up the rock.
I am harnessed to you.
The sparks in my brain
Are from your furnace.
I hold up what you dreamed
Of me for my children.

When you cast your shadows
On every word and deed,
How can I tell
You are no more?

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  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:17:00 AM
    But you have written he IS there, in every smile as you pass a mirror, in the timber of your voice, in the eyes of your children..everafter! So nice to hear from you again my friend. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:55:00 PM
    Hi Fabiyas - Such a sensitive poem about your connection to your dad. Love it! -Gail

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 11:27:00 AM
    love this one, too Fab. It reminds me of my dad, who i'm missing sooooo much. thanks for sharing. i will read your other poems next time because it's late here. Good luck always.

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 9:22:00 PM
    I am doing ok, by the way, thanks for asking. Hope you are too.

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 9:21:00 PM
    wow,Fabiyas, what feeling in this one. I love the emotion of it, I love what it is telling me!

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:42:00 AM
    Dear Fab, I kept looking for a new one by you. This is worth waiting for. It is absolutely capturing. The last stanza has left me suspended in special memory. love, Kathy