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Within my Dream


Within my dream some tiny dreams seek butterfly wings and look at the sky, I touch them all and whisper colours colours of my desire then let them fly. Within my dream a rainbow's birth sprinkling colours across the sky, I add two wings with mind's brush make it a bird and let it fly. Within my dream first monsoon rain scent of a woman spreads in my sky, I dream of YOU add wings to my love and in that rain let it fly. Within my dream your sweet smile an eternal sunrise in my sky, all my dreams start from it in butterfly wings they begin to fly. ************************** Contest : Dreams 2nd August 2012

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  1. Date: 5/14/2013 7:53:00 AM

    Beautiful Kash, congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 7:59:00 PM

    Your dreams are lovely Kash, congrats xxx

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 1:38:00 PM

    This has such an ethereal quality......just lovely and 'dreamy' !!!

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 10:57:00 PM

    Something very special here, I see. Magical...makes me feel light and happy...great to feel this way from reading this awesome gem.

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 8:14:00 PM

    Dada, Pd didn't specify for the name to be written, that is why I didn't put my name and i checked her contest rule..anyways it is better if they judge blindly..

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 1:30:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest of Joyce "My Favorite" Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 5:19:00 AM

    congrats on another marvelous win with this gorgeous expression of poetry Kash .. luv ..

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 10:11:00 PM

    Really enjoyed this poem, I believe I have read it before. Well done. thank you for sharing. Lee

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 8:04:00 PM

    This is excellent, Kash! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 12:19:00 PM

    congrats

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 10:42:00 PM

    Congrats Kash with this very beautiful poem of your winning!

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 8:14:00 PM

    Kash, congratulations, in Joyce's favorite contest... good night~ PD

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 3:49:00 PM

    Well, I only wish I could write as well in a second language. I would never have guessed. I loved the concept of your dreams all being allowed to fly. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 12:30:00 PM

    which dream contest was this? I guess I didn't place, and I must have entered an oldie or something.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 12:29:00 PM

    wow, this must be the one that I failed to see, Kash. It is BEAUTIFUL. FAVE

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 10:55:00 AM

    A well deserved placement for you in Kim's "Dream" contest. Congratulations Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 1:55:00 PM

    Beautiful Kash! Congrats! :) Tanya

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 9:00:00 AM

    A very beautiful piece, Kash. I love every line :)

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 8:59:00 AM

    raring to congratulate you , kash!.. don;t know any poet by that phillippine name.. i'll go check..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 5:01:00 AM

    Hi Kash congats on your win in the comp, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 9:36:00 PM

    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 7:39:00 PM

    Kash; this is very lovely. I enjoyed it very much. Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 9:22:00 AM

    There is an air of breathlessness in this beautiful poem.......as if it has wings of its own. Lovely, Kash!!

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:06:00 AM

    Congratulations Kash

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 6:18:00 PM

    Kash this poem is only one word STUNNING!!!! congratulations on your fantastic win in Kim's contest. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 6:08:00 PM

    Beautiful write Kash....congrats!

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 5:31:00 PM

    Yes this was so meant to be...congrats!

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 5:24:00 PM

    Kash, congrats on your win - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 3:27:00 PM

    congrats on your win Kash...great poem

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 3:14:00 PM

    Awesome poetry Kash, congrats on your super win hugs vie

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