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Nurturing the Soul


verdant sprouts shoot forth from the freshly quenched earth. All welcome the rebirth and rising of souls. Archaic walls crumble. Who knows the true worth of faith, no pretenses, of waning control? An unnamed blessing, we cast off our burdens, to emerge from sleep behind opaque curtains. Rain nurtures the tender seedlings beneath soil. With light, dusty land will bear fruit from our toil.

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  1. Date: 8/10/2012 5:54:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#194" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 2:45:00 PM

    oh, you used a rispetto form. HOw nice to see one of those!! Congrats on your win, Rhonda. Very nice poem.

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 8:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem winning. I light, touching rispetto.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 3:14:00 PM

    lovely write Rhonda...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:50:00 AM

    Dear dear Rhonda,thank you for the mail,you have the most wonderful heart and it reflects in your poetry,no wonder you have so much success in the contests...congratulations to you on your win..dear heart.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:31:00 AM

    Rhonda congrats on your win, love it...David

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:06:00 AM

    I really enjoyed that journey. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:37:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:17:00 AM

    Congratulations Rhonda on another well deserved win xx

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 5:21:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, Rhonda. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 3:34:00 AM

    Very well penned Rhonda, loved the read. Wonderful comparison between nature and soul.

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 6:53:00 PM

    Rhonda, I always say a seed will not grow without sunlight and water. Likewise, love growns with trust, faith and tender care. Great write with indepth expressions. Thanks for comments. One love. Joy Wells.

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 12:53:00 PM

    soup mal...

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 9:16:00 PM

    Splendid use of adjectives through wonderful imagery, Rhonda! Beautiful! Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 1:34:00 PM

    a whole meadow of heartfelt expression leaving gentle images on my mind.... pure delight, rhonda..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 12:45:00 PM

    I love your poetry Rhonda with words always in melody like a song meant to be sung. Love always, Gail

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 12:02:00 PM

    Excellent visionary poetry Rhonda, enjoyed it very much, hugs vie

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 10:54:00 AM

    A frequently spied occurrence, the replenishing of souls within the Earth! While we cast our burdens, it seems we wake behind opaque curtains! What a wonderful combination of lines, I paraphrased them! You did wondrous with this poem! Great Work!!