TWO WORLDS COLLIDING--



Mars and Venus clash
fiery blaze in sky of life...
unite and rotate

man and woman bound
by sacred thread of wedlock...
poles apart yet one



Yesha Shah
For the contest: Two Worlds Colliding
Sponsor: Russel Sivey

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Sara Kendrick Date: 8/18/2012 2:25:00 PM ((())!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/16/2012 5:57:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Yesha. Love, Carol
Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/15/2012 11:42:00 PM YESHA, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD
Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/14/2012 7:48:00 PM you did a really good idea, man vs woman and the Mars/venus theme. Clever one. Congrats on your win.
Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/12/2012 6:33:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
David Williams Date: 8/12/2012 2:34:00 AM Yesha congrats on your splendid win, love it...David
Kim Merryman Date: 8/11/2012 3:51:00 PM I like this, Yesha! The 2nd one is my favorite. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
yasmin khan Date: 8/11/2012 4:28:00 AM congrads on your win Yesha.
kash poet Date: 8/3/2012 8:49:00 AM Excellent approach to the theme of the contest!It is sure a winner!
Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/2/2012 3:38:00 PM and of course, this is a winner!!!
Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/2/2012 3:33:00 PM boy, I can just picture those two planets clashing!! But it still would not be as bad as a man and a woman who are complete opposites!!!
Sara Kendrick Date: 8/2/2012 2:31:00 PM Great idea for the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the kind review of my work.It is true that men are from Mars and women from Venus...Sara
David Williams Date: 8/2/2012 8:34:00 AM yesha what a bang that would create, I like it,,good luck..David
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 8/2/2012 8:30:00 AM fabulous Yesha.. simply poignant piece luv.. best wishes.. amazing parallels on the planets and humanity..
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/2/2012 5:20:00 AM Very good Yesha - Wish you luck in contest - hope for a win for you! - Have a lovely day. - // oxox Anne-Lise :)

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TWO WORLDS COLLIDING--

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