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open ur eyes

Does she see blinded by the lights, what will still shine.
Open your eyes, hold my heart, you'll never be mine.
Clay. Created, dreams wash the dirt away.
Truth gleams.her heart breaks, she was in a daze.
Laughing, hurting, sneaking she feels they're all the same.
Mixed emotions, life unfolding, must she change her ways.
A book well written,if it was no fake, if there was no girl, no fate.
If she hadn't fell for falling far, there would have been no mistake.

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  1. Date: 9/27/2012 12:07:00 PM
    HAD TO READ AGAIN SUCH A NICE POEM MATE LIKE ALL YOUR OTHER WRITES THANKYOU FOR COMMENTS ON MINE XX DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 3:18:00 PM
    Thanks for sharing a well written poem, Jessica, well done & look forwars to reading more of the same. BLess you, Gordon

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 12:37:00 PM
    ....*.* Ps., Passing Back By To Congratulate Your Precious Beauty Upon This Well Deserved Feature Of The Week Here At PoPoSoup ~ My Love, Tristen *.*

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 10:50:00 AM
    WICKED POEM JESSICA I DONT THINK THINGS ALWAYS WORK OUT THE WAY YOU WANT THEM TO SIMILER TO MY SUMBLE AND ONE OF A KIND XX DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 2:05:00 PM
    JESSICA, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 11:50:00 AM
    *.* Leaves One Imagining What This Priceless Girls Story May Have All Been; At Least In Re Unto This Particular Painting Here ? I Like The Brush Strokes, The Depth & The Heart I Find, Beautiful Jessica ~ Tis What I Like About Little Baby's, Their Not Expected To Worry About Carry Nor Sort Anything; Just To Experience 'The Beauty of Love' ~ Smile, Have A Beautiful Day & Keep Painting ~ My Love To You, Tristen *.*

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 10:34:00 AM
    good poem... congrats Jessica :)

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 12:00:00 PM
    Well written poem Jessica, thank you for sharing it. - oxox Anne-Lise :)