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  1. Date: 1/14/2014 12:26:00 PM

    I'm saving the best for last...((learn from the best) David... Thanks for the Tex, nickname... , ------ ~ Did you really think I'd leave without stopping by to say Good-bye. Never, Muwahahahaha! Why the word alone sounds -forever and difficult. LOL, I love this place and the poets. A couple of soup friends and I are taking a short vacation. REMEMBER! The Best Thing About Leaving is the "RETURN." I will leave in good faith, in hopes you don't forget me, and you are looking forward in having me visit you and your poems in the future. HAHA, I will bring a new me when I return. "I Can't wait to see you again:) If you ever want me to read a certain poem or you wish to say hi... Drop by my E-Mail Address. :) Sincerely yours ~Always & Forever~ The Sweet Poet Destroyer

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 9:37:00 AM

    nice one really!

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 10:38:00 AM

    I am stopping by your list of poetry to read a poem and thank you for your kind comment on my poetry David. It is a pleasure to read your writing. Hope you are enjoying this beautiful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:55:00 PM

    Reminds of an old comment we use to write in each others yearbooks in school.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 4:23:00 PM

    shortcuts 4 understanding while, sms the shorter style, shorthand of the blest:)

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 3:27:00 PM

    One thing for sure it is different..Very difficult for me to read and understand which probably separates me from the younger generation..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:22:00 PM

    Clever and unique and sorry have not had time to read what Nette said in her blog. Thanks for your comments. love phyl

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 12:42:00 PM

    lol, great fun, David - I haven't read Nette's blog, but I couldn't agree more

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 9:51:00 AM

    Oh God those old spelling bees. Who cares now. Like painting by the numbers. Great poem. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 9:29:00 AM

    It's a sms style poetry. Loved and enjoyed the new style. Always bl

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 4:56:00 AM

    I was just going to ask you how your dinner party had been. So its tomorrow. Well you have a great time with your guests and yes that poem has an essence of India to it and something new about a love story your guests will come to know.

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 11:34:00 PM

    David, Does that make me a poet? You tease me about entering your competitions,but what in God's name is a Vireliai? Mine come from the gut, cannot spell to save their lives and do not know their ass from their elbow! Also, reading between the lines here, the word insecure is screaming out. Can you hear it?Stop teasing me please.

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 4:30:00 PM

    Very clever David!!!

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 3:59:00 PM

    See what I just did for you?X

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 9:13:00 AM

    Oh boy, clever stuff David, they will be no doubt one day a form of poetry called TEXTspert, or something like that. enjoyed. harry

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 6:13:00 AM

    Hi David this text speak I no Understand like the full written word myself, this is very clever though, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 5:03:00 AM

    :)) SMART thinking and clever write! I M d lited!

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 6:26:00 PM

    This is so cool lol!! The title and content go hand in hand. I enjoyed reading this David :-)

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 1:08:00 PM

    Very Clever! And thank you for your kind words. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 10:52:00 AM

    Gosh David, U bro8 bck sum memories wit this wud b poem of urs :) I still get on my niece case for typing like this when she sends me a text message ect ;)

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 8:54:00 AM

    I think this type of writing should have it's own category on is like another form, right? We can acknowlege it without liking it. (and btw, I've written 1 myself, but it's hard 2 take it seriously when it looks like 5 yr old scribble)

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 4:51:00 AM

    David, Well said my friend. I just enjoy reading poetry, I never pay attention to the lay out or the misspelled words. I actually had to put someone in their place awhile back because he said my poem was ruined by a couple misspelled words. The word pompis ass came to mind with that fella. lol......... Write how ever you like or however other people would like to write because I will read them and enjoy either way. Take care, Dave

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 2:32:00 AM

    egad, david.. i can't comment on blogs as TPS settings are down as always... i'll try later to answer you.. for now, whether english is a second language or not, this piece will not qualify, lol.. unless it's for a most dreaded poem contest??.. you are so funny!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 8:59:00 PM

    oh wow, now you have my curiosity up on this blog of Nette's. I can only imagine what was said by some people!!!

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 4:44:00 PM

    yeah David love your creativity,hats off to you,great write

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 3:21:00 PM

    David U R 2 Much I C Y U Like writing, it is 2 much fun 4 u sweet man U R A door A bull but you rock the site, V not for V but 4 Victory on you xxx

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 3:16:00 PM

    Ha, this is quite the funny write! Very clever David! I enjoyed this creative piece very much my friend! Great Work!!