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What Dreams are Made of

Thoughts know of no bounds,
hopes leading to the sounds.

Dreary reality replaced by lustrous fantasy-
Nature fails to provide, yet the conception provides pure ecstasy!

Not for the frail for terror-joy are abound,
Screams and laughter–resound.

To important of a role-
Often referred- the key to the soul.

Sublime!
What wonderful time!

Powerful tool,
Why ridicule?

Vibrant imagination,
Never fall to realities-possession.

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  1. Date: 8/2/2012 12:49:00 PM

    wonderful last lines of a wonderfully written poem, luis... from the heart it is... best of luck!..:) huggs

    Martinez-Rivera Avatar Luis Martinez-Rivera Date: 8/2/2012 12:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 7/31/2012 4:57:00 PM

    this just made my coffee break=)

    Martinez-Rivera Avatar Luis Martinez-Rivera Date: 8/2/2012 12:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you enjoyed it
  1. Date: 7/31/2012 2:49:00 PM

    nice couplet Luis...enjoyed....best wishes ..Joseph

    Martinez-Rivera Avatar Luis Martinez-Rivera Date: 8/2/2012 12:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the read :D
  1. Date: 7/31/2012 1:18:00 PM

    Well done Luis, it is your dream - I just post my dream, welcome to read my dream. - Wish you good luck in contest!!! - Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 1:09:00 PM

    dreamy like a river filled with fluid imagination, luis... best winning wishes and hugggs!..:)