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  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:57:00 PM
    Very nicely written. well done. Lee

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 9:59:00 AM
    Hello David, I love this most especially because I can relate to the passages. It is most beautiful and one of my favorites. Just swept my heart away........................ As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 5:00:00 AM
    Beautiful combination of natural imagery and romanticism, loved the read....Thank you for your kind words at my pages.

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 3:06:00 PM
    Now this is erotic... What I want to know is if you made up the one about the proposal... did you make up the one about the red head and the one testicle? I thought you had given up on me, then I discovered your list of comments I like them all except the flippant one after WHAM BAM... my poor, frustrated, youngish Irish housewife one.....

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 9:02:00 PM
    David, why did you call this one free verse. I really like it, but it is repeating that one line over and over. Much like a kyrielle. I guess because it is unrhymed? I think it is more a verse or lyrical. Something other than free verse anyway. It's lovely.

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 2:23:00 PM
    This is a beautiful piece, simply a beautiful piece my friend! I enjoyed the purely enhanced feel of this write! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 12:48:00 PM
    oh, this is music of tender love, and your image -laden piece expresses it well, david... beautiful!!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:57:00 AM
    Romantic one David lovely imagery xx Thanks

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:27:00 AM
    Hi David glad to be back to read such words and imagery only you can do this, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 9:19:00 AM
    Passionate work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 9:09:00 AM
    Very sensuous writing !! The scenes are inviting....pulling this reader in. Well done !!