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The Life of a Land Lover

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The Life of a Land Lover

The journey of perilous seas-
a vessel so grand-
plunging into the darkest abyss-
eagerly searching as the house upon a rock-

Steering true through mutinies,
teetering on the brink of tipping!

Rallying, never to waver again!

Yet another voyage just dawning-forevermore!

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  1. Date: 8/15/2012 11:33:00 PM

    nice poem..thanks for sharing.... **Mary**

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 5:43:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem Week" contest Luis. Love, Carol

    Martinez-Rivera Avatar Luis Martinez-Rivera Date: 8/15/2012 11:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You :D
  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:39:00 AM

    Luis congrats on your win, love it...David

    Martinez-Rivera Avatar Luis Martinez-Rivera Date: 8/15/2012 11:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you like it :)
  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:29:00 AM

    Well done. Lee

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 7:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Luis, well done xx

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 7:05:00 AM

    congrats on your win Luis...nicely done

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:04:00 PM

    Luis ;-) congratulations with your awesome poem of the week. Thanks for the contest support. LUV~ PD

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 12:15:00 PM

    Nice portrait of a sea going ship. Two typos - In the second line in should be vessel and in the next to last line - waver instead of waiver. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

    Martinez-Rivera Avatar Luis Martinez-Rivera Date: 7/31/2012 12:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you I wrote that on my Android so the auto correct messed me up.
  1. Date: 7/31/2012 9:51:00 AM

    nicely penned Luis..thanks for stopping by ....and good luck in the contest....Joseph