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Real Concern

Right when I think
Each 
And every thought I have is cared about with real
Love by him it's dashed with his thoughtless

Comments.
Over and over it's seems like
Nothing I do is really appreciated.
Can I really take on the 
Ever
Reaching task of taking the first step and feeling 
Nothing but "lost" in the process?

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  1. Date: 7/30/2012 2:11:00 PM
    Wonderful Acrostic. Love is a give and receive thing, to always give and not receive leaves one stunted, unable to grow. Best wishes. :) Tanya