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Swinging on a Star

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Swinging on a Star

                                                     A sky which was dark...
                                               I traveled blind without sight...
                                                   Searching and searching...
                                             Then a warm light passed by me...
                                                 "Rosanna" became my star...



                                                                  by
                                                      Michael J Falotico
                                                                 For
                                              Sweethearts "Swinging on a Star"
                                                              contest

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  1. Date: 9/5/2012 10:58:00 PM

    nice ;} I see why you won .

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 4:16:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. This is a very tender poem. Suzette

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 2:29:00 PM

    congrats on your win in the contest with this stunning piece.. Soup mail cory

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:29:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Swinging On a Star" contest Michael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:17:00 PM

    Wonderful tanka here Michael!Congrats on the win!!

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 5:42:00 PM

    Congrats on your win with this beautiful, romantic write! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 3:05:00 PM

    Michael congrats on your win...you big smoothie..David

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:49:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your win Michael xx

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 12:34:00 AM

    CONGRATULATIONS,,, with your awesome win...xox~PD

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:38:00 PM

    sweetness all over, michael.. rosanna must be proud!.. congrats with lotsa huggs!.:)

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:25:00 PM

    Yes, like Andrea said lovely name and lovely write, Congrats!

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 8:32:00 PM

    BEAUTIFUL, Michael. Her name is so beautiful too. Congrats on your win I see too.

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 8:03:00 PM

    congrats Michael luv on 5th place.. for this beautiful starry entry luv.. Russell has won 4th..not 5th as list indicates.. my head is seeing double..oh..

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 12:04:00 PM

    This is a fabulous and warm loving write my friend! I'm sure your "Rosanna" is happy to be in a poem of yours Michael! I really enjoyed this creative piece you have written! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 10:35:00 AM

    Sweet words to your lovely Rosanna,Michael.Great entry for Sweethearts contest:) Its really nice to see you around here again,my friend.Missed you alot brother!

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 8:30:00 AM

    Ahhh, so sweet Michael! A lovely entry for the contest!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 6:52:00 AM

    i loved your poem.. Good luck in the contest. cory

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 6:08:00 AM

    Beautiful tanka Michael, love the shine in your Rosanna Star, Hosanna in the highest he has found a precious star, have a great day my dear and keep that star close to your heart where it will brighten your soul, luv vie