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On the Ocean waves

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On the Ocean waves

Green
Bottle
Messenger
of my heart’s wants.
Incessantly tossed on the ocean waves.

Dangerously close to its submersion
as it fights its
way to your
errant
heart.

All
the while
battling tides
and slaying sharks
in a bid to entice with notes of love.



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  1. Date: 12/9/2012 5:23:00 PM

    Wow, excellent flow of words. Great write and thanks for sharing. Take care

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 1:58:00 AM

    just rereading this one from a while back. I really like it.

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 2:19:00 PM

    That is no amateur writing! I loved it!

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 9:10:00 PM

    wow you wrapped a lot of emotions in that bottle. lovely poem. warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:30:00 PM

    The beauty of struggle - very confident style Vicky - J.A.B.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:11:00 AM

    A well deserved win for you. Congratulations Vicky. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 1:52:00 AM

    is this a double tetractys, vicky?... well done!. congrats on your win with huggs..:)

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 8/7/2012 2:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Nette, it's a triple tetractys. Thanks for your visit.
  1. Date: 8/6/2012 11:30:00 PM

    Nicely done. It's impressive.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 10:40:00 AM

    I love this clever write, Vicky! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 9:33:00 AM

    Dear Vicky, So imaginative is this poem, so full of angst. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Kathy

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 8:28:00 AM

    Congratulations Vicky xx

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 7:34:00 AM

    Love this piece ~~ MuJacks

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 3:19:00 AM

    You have done this poem so uniquely Vicky, very well done!!! - Have a lovely day. - oxox love // Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 8:39:00 PM

    It is in perilous waters and hopefully to arrive to your hearts' desired!!! I enjoyed seeing your poem in Tetractys form.

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 10:49:00 AM

    dear Vicky.i love your work aswell and thank you for commenting on my ONE HIT WONDER.A Jabavu drive is the name of a street.just like like \road,lane etc.this poem is a true story so we used to walk along jabavu drive.the thing is my x asked me to write some thing about him and i didnt knw what to write.

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 7/31/2012 11:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ha! Cool! Thanks for the clarification Odeline!
  1. Date: 7/30/2012 12:53:00 PM

    We've all been here. No matter who we pick, it'll always be something. Perfectly said!

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 6:15:00 AM

    Bravo, bravo, bravo!!!! Loving your form of tetractys here...excellent..very strong words here!!! Loving your work Vicky!! Oh, and thx for stopping by.