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  1. Date: 12/9/2012 5:23:00 PM
    Wow, excellent flow of words. Great write and thanks for sharing. Take care

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 1:58:00 AM
    just rereading this one from a while back. I really like it.

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 2:19:00 PM
    That is no amateur writing! I loved it!

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 9:10:00 PM
    wow you wrapped a lot of emotions in that bottle. lovely poem. warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:30:00 PM
    The beauty of struggle - very confident style Vicky - J.A.B.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:11:00 AM
    A well deserved win for you. Congratulations Vicky. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 1:52:00 AM
    is this a double tetractys, vicky?... well done!. congrats on your win with huggs..:)

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 8/7/2012 2:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Nette, it's a triple tetractys. Thanks for your visit.
  1. Date: 8/6/2012 11:30:00 PM
    Nicely done. It's impressive.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 10:40:00 AM
    I love this clever write, Vicky! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 9:33:00 AM
    Dear Vicky, So imaginative is this poem, so full of angst. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Kathy

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 8:28:00 AM
    Congratulations Vicky xx

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 7:34:00 AM
    Love this piece ~~ MuJacks

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 3:19:00 AM
    You have done this poem so uniquely Vicky, very well done!!! - Have a lovely day. - oxox love // Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 8:39:00 PM
    It is in perilous waters and hopefully to arrive to your hearts' desired!!! I enjoyed seeing your poem in Tetractys form.

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 10:49:00 AM
    dear Vicky.i love your work aswell and thank you for commenting on my ONE HIT WONDER.A Jabavu drive is the name of a street.just like like \road,lane etc.this poem is a true story so we used to walk along jabavu drive.the thing is my x asked me to write some thing about him and i didnt knw what to write.

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 7/31/2012 11:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ha! Cool! Thanks for the clarification Odeline!
  1. Date: 7/30/2012 6:15:00 AM
    Bravo, bravo, bravo!!!! Loving your form of tetractys here...excellent..very strong words here!!! Loving your work Vicky!! Oh, and thx for stopping by.