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POETRY

P:   People
O:  Offering 
E:   Everlasting
T:   Talent,
R:   Rule 
Y:   you


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  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:05:00 PM

    Thanks Robert, it's so sweet of you to come up with a wise and healthy suggestion. But truly; i'll leave it the way it is. Because it's true, for eg; the wise rule, the dump don't. The brave lead; the weak don't, and the smart and vigilant; take it all, not the most knowlegable. So it's a harsh world already; whats the need to hide the truth? The wise simple rule, not the fools! Thanks ones more,n keep up the good work.

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 10:46:00 AM

    A suggestion my friend... why not try R: Revere or Revitalize. Rule appears to be quite harsh, and restrictive. I am more inclined to think People Offer Everlasting Talent if they think there is potential. Just a thought...YarnSpinner

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 4:40:00 PM

    @ Vienna, u are such a jem. You got it so so right! It couldn't be better explained, I will simply just call it 'poeticalology' *smiles* I went through some of your poems, they rock and it's so graced! Kingfemi.

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 8:26:00 PM

    P Perfect O Observations E Eclectic T truths R Reserved Y You Great work Femi, enjoyed joining in on your masterpiece, hugs vie