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Two Worlds Colliding

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Two Worlds Colliding

two worlds colliding
with chemical reactions -- 
bright-eyed lovers meet

youthful hearts explode
under summer's fiery spell --
raging hormones blaze 

By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, July 29, 2012
for Two Worlds Colliding Contest (Russell Sivey) 

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  1. Date: 8/18/2012 2:05:00 PM
    Great topic..Enjoyed..((()))Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:08:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 11:45:00 PM
    RHONDA, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 7:57:00 PM
    I remember yours. And really liking it. Belated congrats on this great write.

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 6:38:00 PM
    Very different you have both worlds colliding in each senryu! Unique approach. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 2:39:00 AM
    Rhonda congrats on your great win....David

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 5:03:00 PM
    WOWOWOWOOWOWWOW!!!! This will surely make it to the top! =)

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 11:15:00 PM
    What a fiery reaction this! Great great entry Rhonda.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 10:12:00 PM
    OHH!! Ahhhhh! : ) An original take on Russell's contest. I like the idea. "with chemical reactions"... "raging hormones blaze"!! Awesome lines, Rhonda! It's a winner! My best wishes. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 3:12:00 PM
    You did an awesome job in this contest. This is one of the best I've seen,Rhonda. I hope I can do as well!!

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 4:07:00 PM
    Rhonda first senryu I have read on this contest, I like yours, good luck..David