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Two Worlds Colliding


the rich and poor
your world and mine…
ocean’s apart

our worlds collide 
when cultures clashed…
different values

© 29/7/2012

David Williams for Russell's Two Worlds Colliding contest..

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  1. Date: 8/18/2012 2:06:00 PM

    ((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:07:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 11:45:00 PM

    DAVID, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ TEX

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 7:56:00 PM

    Big belated congrats to you on a well deserved win. David.

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 1:16:00 AM

    Congrats David! Never has a divide been more pronounced than that of the rich and the poor, and culture comes in close.Nice write!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 7:33:00 PM

    Congratulations David on your awesome win! I like the idea of interracial marriages fabricated in your witty haiku. =)

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 6:36:00 PM

    In order to survive happy I think all of us should reavaluate what it means to be 'rich' and 'poor' aye? Just having your beautiful wife to wake up to makes YOU rich ;)Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 6:48:00 AM

    Hello David, I love yours, you went with realism, congratulations on your win ;) now I know why you said I am smooth.. you made me smile with that one. Hope your Sunday is a great one, love Wilma

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 2:42:00 AM

    I am okay now David,thank you...congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 5:35:00 PM

    Wonderful write,David.YES! culture does clash.Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 4:16:00 PM

    This is great, David. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 4:32:00 PM

    very true. thanks for your comments

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 11:13:00 PM

    Great entry for the contest, David...good luck with it.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 10:17:00 PM

    Excellent! I love Rhonda's entry, but this one is perfect! Best of luck in the Contest. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 4:17:00 PM

    as ole Jim Reeves sung 'thats what happens when two worlds collide'....well done mate...

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 2:38:00 PM

    This is a very practical one, David. I have no clue how to approach it but I hope to get the old noggin thinking!

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 6:50:00 AM

    Excellent thoughts, David! We are all so different and yet the same. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 5:34:00 AM

    Very well put together David... Wishing You a wonderful week...MJF

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 3:49:00 PM

    Oops....after counting my total, maybe I should go for Forty Shades Of Green? What do you think? Jean.

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 3:29:00 PM

    Interesting.... David, I'm thinking of releasing an eBook of fifty poems called Fifty Shades Of Irish....Any advice? Jean

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 2:49:00 PM

    This is A Very Good entry David,I really like your take on the topic...this wins hands down dude!are you enjoying the Olympics David?

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 1:36:00 PM

    Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..The rich and poor don't bump into each other much in this area for they live in different worlds...Sara

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 12:01:00 PM

    Great haiku`s here my friend.Unbeliveable to think how we`ve ended up so different on this planet, seen from a culturel aspect.Not to mention how bad it can turn out if don`t accept our neighbors`mindset.Have a great Sunday,David.My beer and steaks are drowning over here..!!

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 10:03:00 AM

    Enjoyed this write, David. I'm sorry about your sandwich though.:( When I'd seen what a worble was, I wasn't very hungry for a while. Poor cows, their tails aren't long enough to swat flies away.:( Take care!! Mikki