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She and I

I looked at her and she looked back.  
Her brown 'painted' hair stood in a mess on her head.  
Her head lightly tilted to her left.  
Her eyes were blank; tired but emotionless.
I leaned in a little closer to see what was happening to her.  
And she leaned forward, as if to show me what was wrong.
But she did not seem to know the answer to that.  
Her eyes wondered for a little while.  
I kept looking at her, not sure how to respond.  
Then i saw that look.  
The look that i have not seen on her for a while.  
The look of ultimate sadness and desperation.  
She only allowed me to see it for a second.  
She then took it all and pushed it away.  
Somewhere far inside.  
And her face showed no emotions afterwards.  
She hugged herself.  
A piece of her heart was gone.

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  1. Date: 9/14/2012 8:11:00 AM
    wow.. true expression of brokenhearted.. i love it!!

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 8:24:00 AM
    really deep. wonderful lines. touching. ...

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 6:10:00 AM
    very emotional piece. very good!! thanks for you comments on my work

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:38:00 PM
    Hi, Ayman,,, awee... to see this look for just a second can mean alot... very sad and touching... desperation, is a match that i don't like getting close too... enjoyed.. xox~PD.......... Can't wait to see your entry for my new kissing contest... xox~pd

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 10:26:00 AM
    This one pulls you in and leaves you with questions and thoughts... Very intriguing.

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 12:59:00 PM
    Ayman, now this is just brilliant, it drags you into her face, I can almost see the colour of her eyes, excellent work...a great first poem and welcome to the soup, I will be reading more of your poems...David

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    Date: 7/28/2012 1:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :) i'm glad you like it. I practically jumped when i saw your comment, it being the first! :)