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I Hate The Word - Hate





             HATE is a very strong word                            I like the soft words
                    HATE is awful                                  why not show consideration
               HATE leads to unrest                                     I like the peace
               HATE leads to hostility                                  friendship is a joy
                  HATE means war                                 why kill, when we can love
            The world is full of HATRED                  let`s share the world with happiness
                                      
                                                



                


*** NOT for the contest.
A-L Andresen
28.July 2012

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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 4:19:00 AM

    When I was little I used to have little temper tantrums (people hated babysitting me). That doesn't happen anymore and I'm glad... hatred is like a very heavy boulder that you have to lug around with you wherever you go. Why carry a big dumb rock around with you? Another good one! I think this piece, specifically, is one that tells me the most about who you are as a person...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/16/2013 4:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for taking the time to read it Timothy ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 9:33:00 AM

    This is so true, I wish more people had the view you have, the world would be a happier and safer place!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/23/2012 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jordan, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 7:51:00 AM

    Yes, hate is more than the f-word. Bless you Anne!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2012 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    David, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:51:00 AM

    My dear Anne Lise,i think you are the best thing that has happened to the soup,i may not write a poem about you dear friend but my heart is so overflowing with warmth for you that I can't find enough words to really express al l that I feel is good in you and a poem is not enough to express your goodness...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/7/2012 11:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sweet Yasmin, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/4/2012 5:37:00 AM

    I can't see if I commented on this before, but I really like how you did this one, dividing it up and showing contrasts. too bad it was not in the contest!!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/4/2012 6:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andrea, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:43:00 AM

    Me too! i hate HATE, for you though only peace and happiness, after all you give so much to us all here on soup, in fact you are very special.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/29/2012 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry so sweet comments.There is only one Harry Horsman to ! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2012 6:55:00 AM

    love the message you send.. I do not like the word HATE either sounds so brutal.. have a great day.. soup mail Cory

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2012 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Cory, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 2:28:00 PM

    Very nice poem here. :) Always, Laura

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2012 2:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Laura, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 7:08:00 AM

    This is a very fantastic poem of yours, Anne Lise. Thank you very much for sharing especially your friendship and love. hugs-leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/14/2012 9:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Leonora, thank you for visit and comments my poem - always welcome . oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/8/2012 12:38:00 PM

    No room for hate,when all you have is LOVE in your heart..~<3 And you do have love :o) Nice write! f.e.f oxox

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/8/2012 12:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dan, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/6/2012 6:20:00 PM

    What a plea for love and understanding. I adore it.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/7/2012 3:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Danny, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 8/6/2012 5:45:00 PM

    Good write Anne i like this xx Thank you for the lovely comment on my poem x

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/7/2012 3:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dawn, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 8/4/2012 1:13:00 PM

    Good write Anne. I like it. Thanks for sharing. Have a good weekend. Lucilla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/4/2012 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lucilla, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 8/2/2012 2:46:00 PM

    if only things were like this nice poem thankyou for your comments on mine xx david scott

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/3/2012 2:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    David, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 8/2/2012 2:20:00 PM

    Yep! The word is LOVE. Love you, Anne. daver

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/2/2012 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Daver, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 8/2/2012 9:33:00 AM

    Superb poem. Both positive and negative are depicted with few words about hate and love. Always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/2/2012 10:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    bl. - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/2/2012 8:33:00 AM

    super impact of parallels on hate and peace and joy Anne-Lise.. u brought it all out on this page luv..

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/2/2012 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Linda-Marie, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/2/2012 12:56:00 AM

    simple yet very strong message.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/2/2012 3:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kenisha, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 8/1/2012 1:00:00 PM

    Great poem.short but with the use of strong words, simple but deep. I engoyed reading it;)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/1/2012 1:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jessica, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 8/1/2012 8:37:00 AM

    good advice - I've heard that there can't be love without hate - that you have to know one to know the other. what do you think?

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/1/2012 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi, B.E.S. - I do not use the word hate - there are thing I do no like - but :HATE - I do not think I can hate, it is a very,very strong word - and not forgiveness. - Thank you for visit and comments my poem / you are always welcome. - Have a lovely day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:18:00 AM

    Hi Anne Lise very well put I for one totally agree with you, all the best Owen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2012 11:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Owen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/31/2012 8:53:00 AM

    This is very true & thoughtful grandma...I love the way you wrote it...much enjoyed your poem...:)...HUGS!!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2012 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jonas, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love grandma :)
  1. Date: 7/31/2012 5:00:00 AM

    Hi Anne nice to see you as a premium member...David

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2012 5:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you David. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/31/2012 3:42:00 AM

    amazing, anne... i love the contrast approach between love and hate.. nice format that lends more imagery to your pice .. have a smiling day!..:)huggs!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2012 5:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nette, always welcome.....thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/31/2012 12:01:00 AM

    Amazing. Very thoughtful write. Tfs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2012 12:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ravi, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/30/2012 3:29:00 PM

    Awesome write Anne Lise...it takes too much energy to hate, I love how you think, love is definitely the way to go! Hugs. Soup mail!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2012 12:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Cecilia, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/30/2012 2:38:00 PM

    If you look at my latest poem - "Towards a Capitol of the World" you will see a similar theme to this fine effort of yours. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/30/2012 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Matthew, thank you for visit and comments my poem - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/30/2012 5:33:00 AM

    Very good poem Elise- beautiful perceptions from the heart, Thank you , Brenda : ) Love your new photo : )

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/30/2012 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Brenda, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/30/2012 5:13:00 AM

    nice thought and beautiful words....liked it... in the last line ,i think it should be ''full of hatred''instead of with......jst a suggestion...:))))))

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/30/2012 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Irfana, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/29/2012 4:04:00 PM

    oh! if all us can have this kind of mind- love. Then, peace will return to the earth. I do hope that one day man will stop killings and be lover of peace when you and I START to show love to the sicks, homeless, raped, drunkers, smokers, fatherless and widow. Andresen, you hit the nail on the head. Hate is the cause of humanity pain, greed and sorrow. Enter this poem into contest. It is a nice work. I wish you the best.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/29/2012 4:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sometime I write for a contest - this one is not the rigth form who is wanted. - I like to write for you, me and for fun. - Thank you for visit and comments. - love Anne-Lise :)
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