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A Moment In Time

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A Moment In Time

Sleeping Beauty, thinking as I reflected upon her image; this fairy tale revised 

And how quickly she then disappeared; yet but a passing vision afore my eyes

Still not knowing what it was about herself or why her name kept resounding 

Throughout my mind for it seemed as though she had arisen out of nowhere

In splendours enchanting allurement; having drawn myself unto her beautiful

Soul trying to envision her within my faraway thoughts; knowing although this

It did not matter which way she shown; twas her spirit that sparkled in glowing

Radiance unto me still listening to her voice; like the soothing silver waters of

A gently flowing stream; her golden hair sparkling; the rays amid the rising sun

Her precious crown; elegance with a perfect smile; gleeming as polished pearls

Transparent eyes aside, a colourful cathedrals glass; bluer then the bluest skies

Gentle her touch softer than the clouds and her skin, smooth as a virgins flower 

My lashes blinked once more; twas then, that I could see her there this goddess

Surely it seemed, of all men's dreams; flawless she was in mesmerizing her light

Brilliance as that an Angel when she did appear; while bowing my head I reflected

Unto myself again; never would I have believed, that she would of been the one ?

But like a phantom which passes amid the shimmering night; beyound the frosted

Window pane became her sight; before I had awakened she was silently, suddenly

Gone yet my eyes still beam at the thought; how very radiant she has thus become

While she dances away atop the waters in her moment I do know, that her beauty

Joyfuls spirit, shall forever glisten these portraits; her wonders deep inside myself

She but a star within the heavens; "Tis better to have lived and loved, then, to have 

Never loved at all." This stage called life where her loveliness pirouettes; a princess

Swirling about the winds of Eden; glimmering gracefully whileas she twirls; smiling

I watch her now thinking, who would have ever known ? Sleeping Beauty; her kiss....


...."A Moment In Time" ~

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  1. Date: 8/2/2012 6:44:00 PM
    How very enchanting like a fairy tale Beautiful Tristen x Luv always Dawn

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 5:56:00 PM
    Interesting work using the fairy tale of Sleeping Beauty as the basis for the work...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 7:55:00 AM
    A tender and whimsical write, Tristen. You've captured "A Moment In Time", that draws the reader in with your glowing spirit...nice! Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 4:29:00 PM
    a glorious gorgeous write tristen.. Sleeping Beauty is a lovely fairy tale to warm the heart that dreams do come true.. an astonishing atmosphere surrounds these lines luv.. awesome and lovely..

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 3:06:00 PM
    Yes, maybe she was a golden angel.......and true:"Tis better to have lived and loved,then,to never loved at all" - Like it - well done, tristen. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise