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Goodbye

I never thought a word could cause me to sigh
Even worse at times it causes me to loudly cry

So much hurt and heartbreak throughout the years
Saying this word or hearing it brings back my fears

Catch you later I say and everyone understands why
I simply cannot and will not ever tell you goodbye

So it is this word I hate the most goodbye
Now my friend you know the reason why

Contest: What "Word" do you hate the most????

Sponsor: Michael J. Falotico
6th Place Winner
July 30, 2012

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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:32:00 PM

    oi... not a poem i want to feel... good emotions... hope you never say goodbye to us here on the soup...pd

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:06:00 PM

    im so so impressed and loving this poem..its simply amazing and you have poignantly expressed it..this poem taking me into a trancelike state

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 3:59:00 PM

    Beautiful :)

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 4:55:00 PM

    cool poem ..love the originality :)))))

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 1:44:00 PM

    i think so......................I simply cannot and will not ever tell you goodbye very nice poem............ i love it

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 12:06:00 PM

    Lovely poem. I won't say goodbye. Lee

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 11:53:00 AM

    Congratulations Carol...I like it...have a nice day and thanks for your comments and for your support. (^_^)

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 2:45:00 PM

    GOOD couplets Carol! I bet Michael likes it! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 12:07:00 PM

    Nicely Done

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 3:36:00 AM

    simple and strainght.. good 1

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 7:16:00 AM

    Touching and heartfelt write Carol......congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 7:35:00 AM

    goodbye is one of the hardest things to say because it feels so final. It can be the end of something great. Nice write and thank you for the warm welcome i appreciate you for taking time to welcome me

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:06:00 PM

    Carol--I liked the word u chose to write of for Michael's contest...It is a word filled with negative connotations, you are right...congrats on this winner...Catch you later!!!! :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 9:23:00 PM

    Congrats Carol on your placement in Michael's contest. I love this. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 3:41:00 PM

    i agree or though the saying if you dont appeceate saying goobye you wont enjoy hello nice write x david scott

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 12:24:00 PM

    Glad to see this one won. It was very good, Carol!!

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 11:41:00 AM

    Carol just a quick thanks for jy placement in your contest..David

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 10:59:00 AM

    Very good write! Jane

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 9:58:00 AM

    Carol, you have compassion in this poem. Good job. I wish you well in the contest. Thanks for your comments on my poem in the contest On the Ocean Waves.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 12:59:00 PM

    We never know how long it'll be when we say so long. But time will tell it's endless tale and we will meet again on the dusty ole trail.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 7:56:00 AM

    Very touching. A lovely, Haiku you've penned, Carol. Thanks for sharing. Wish you all the best and good luck always!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 6:28:00 PM

    Hi Carol; The word you hate the most. Is to have to say goodbye. I don't blame you. It does cause tears. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:07:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Carol. Great balance in the rhythm.

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:12:00 PM

    Great couplet Carol. Enjoyed!

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 1:12:00 PM

    Wonderfully adorned Goodbye. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 6:12:00 AM

    congrads on your win Carol,i loved this write of yours,wow you really said it well.

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 12:07:00 AM

    Carol. now this was a fun contest to follow out of curiosity... Congratulations with your awesome win... Michael's contest was awesome~xox PD

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 1:43:00 PM

    Thank you all for your comments and congrats. I am so happy to have placed in your contest Michael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 9:07:00 AM

    my grandfather never liked it either. he always said sadly, "so long" ... congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:56:00 AM

    nice poem from a great poet :) thanks for your warm welcome Carol. God bless you.. **Mary**

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