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  1. Date: 7/27/2012 4:58:00 PM TRU it!!! well done David...Cap'n deb.... :)

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 4:05:00 PM
    Hi David, i had one of these,,, sadly i kept it for junk reasons... lol.... My umbrella was accident broken by strong winds. The unicorns theme on my umbrella is what keeps it in my possession.... xox~ soup -mail.... pd

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 10:45:00 AM
    I thought of an actual human rib when I read the first two lines, then I got to the juxtaposition and that changed everything! Very nicely written poem my friend! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 2:42:00 AM
    Good, David - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 12:59:00 AM
    like this as well xx