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Just To let You Know

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Just To let You Know

I’ve eaten the chocolates you brought last night
   in the box that was prettier then the taste of the candy
 
   oh… 
forgive me, I don’t mean to sound ungrateful
 
   but... 
I’m not that kind of girl you know 
  one who is bribed by roses and Whitmans 

   nor...
am I likely to fall for fluid practiced lines
  meant to make a girl swoon and fall in love 
for a careless hour of your time
  with your hungry, shallow anticipations…
of removing my pearls and chemise
 
  you know…
the one who waits with excited expectations
  for your silvery seductions...
just yearning to be seduced 
  by your lover boy’s touch
 
  or …
for a midnight tryst 
  that ends before it even begins
 
  oh yes... 
I see your majolica, opaque heart 
  It reveals the opacity of your dull mind 
 
  nay,...
you interest me not 
  my heart rises to the golden boy
the one who laughs with his eyes
 
  and...
he really does see me with his heart
  the one who listens- who knows the color of my eyes 
he spends $1 on my favorite kind of licorice

  not… 
$20 for a meaningless box of chocolates or…
  roses meant only to impress
 
he's the one who learns quickly 
  he really wants to know things about me
those little endearments…
 
  you know...
like what my middle and last names are
  he knows and sees what I have to offer
it will be appreciated by a true heart 

for I am not an empty headed
  young, seductress 
  waiting...
to sweep you off your feet 
with empty lines and ploys 

  no...
I am not that she 
  who expects fancy gifts 
unloading your checkbook of it's contents
  putting out her soul for sale

  no...
I'm not some plastic Tinker toy 
  you put together and then pull apart
 
  so… 
I think I’ll just wait until he comes along
  If not…
when I’m alone I’m happy 
  the smell of the dogwood
their fragrance in the breeze
  I’m okay with just being me

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  1. Date: 7/27/2012 1:55:00 PM
    This was a pleasant poem Anne, that I like very much - ......just be YOU! - Have a happy and colorfull weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    murray Avatar anne p. murray
    Date: 7/27/2012 2:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dear poet friend. I appreciate you thoughtful comments. Love, hugs and peace Anne
  1. Date: 7/27/2012 7:39:00 AM
    wonderful! i love the strength and sassiness you've shown in this poem - you go, girl!

    murray Avatar anne p. murray
    Date: 7/27/2012 8:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well thank you Ilene. It was a fun one to write
  1. Date: 7/27/2012 7:12:00 AM
    I really enjoyed reading all of your new posts/works. I could comment on each one, but will keep it short and simple..EXCELLENT work, keep it up..Thank you for reading mine also....TAH

    murray Avatar anne p. murray
    Date: 7/27/2012 8:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tobey, Thank you so much for all your comments and for taking time to read my "stuff". This one was fun to write, as ilene says it shows my "sassy" side