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What was

In the wind your voice I hear
Closing my eyes I see you near
Air so crisp and clean;It seems like a dream
Travel on windy wings
Show me what the future brings
Asthe wind blows the sun to rest
A lonely nite is the test
  -I still have dreams-

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  1. Date: 7/27/2012 12:54:00 AM

    Nice like it check 3rd 4th 5th line, little mistakes hope you don't mind me pointing them out I always appreciate when someone does for me..xx