Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
 

What was

Edmond Ornelas Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled What was which was written by poet Edmond Ornelas. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Edmond Ornelas

Best Edmond Ornelas Poems

+ Fav Poet

What was

In the wind your voice I hear
Closing my eyes I see you near
Air so crisp and clean;It seems like a dream
Travel on windy wings
Show me what the future brings
Asthe wind blows the sun to rest
A lonely nite is the test
  -I still have dreams-

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 7/27/2012 12:54:00 AM

    Nice like it check 3rd 4th 5th line, little mistakes hope you don't mind me pointing them out I always appreciate when someone does for me..xx