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Cheeseburger please

Sharon Ruebel Avatar Sharon Ruebel - LIFETIME Premium Member Sharon Ruebel - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Cheeseburger please



i ate the nuts
to keep small butts

and drank the tea
which made me p--

devoured the grains
to keep small veins

avoided the tarts
"be still my heart"

now thin and trim
down on my knees

could i please get
a cheeseburger please...



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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 8:37:00 PM
    This put a smile on my face. I could visualize a face book post that I love. A fat cat in the background and a skinny cat in the foreground. The caption "Girl you need a cheeseburger". Enjoyed this poem.

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 3:31:00 PM
    I wasnt expecting the last line! Very funny! : ) Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:40:00 AM
    Hi Sharon very good funny write here, if you want one why not have two, I would, all the best owen

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 4:07:00 PM
    awesome and funny!! Is it for that funny contest?

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 4:59:00 PM
    Would you like it on a bun? Or would that be too much fun? Your poem has left me smiling! It's slim and trim and totally satisfying! I enjoyed it tremdously.

    Ruebel Avatar Sharon Ruebel
    Date: 7/29/2012 1:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Brenda! Haaa just having some fu ..Glad you liked it and thank you for your comments.....Smiles
  1. Date: 7/26/2012 5:34:00 PM
    to do this rhyme is short counts is an amazing feat, shar... i love cheeseburgers!..:) huggs

    Ruebel Avatar Sharon Ruebel
    Date: 7/27/2012 3:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Nette, It has been way to long. Hope you are well and doing fine. Just having fun and I to love a cheeseburger once in a great while. Love Always, Shar