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Waiting


i waited for your love to come
a chosen life the only one

you came and stayed a little while
and on my face you put a smile

i waited for loves question asked
a challenge met without a task

you waited patiently for me
of course i answered yes with glee

we married on that special day
i waited for the chance to say

oh yes i take you for my own
we waited for our happy home

so many years have come and gone
and now my love you have moved on

i sit here waiting once again
with all my heart my love i send...

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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 4:59:00 AM

    yes I see you placed in a contest with this one and I can see why xx

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 4:15:00 PM

    You should be very proud of this poem. Lot's of feeling. These words were determined to be written down.

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 12:35:00 AM

    shoron... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a WAIT..lol ;-) ~xox PD

    Ruebel Avatar Sharon Ruebel Date: 8/3/2012 7:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello PD soooo good to hear from you again...Thank you I am just having some fun. Still working and writing between time... Love, Shar
  1. Date: 8/1/2012 2:05:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Sharon. Love, Carol

    Ruebel Avatar Sharon Ruebel Date: 8/3/2012 7:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Carol, hope all is well with you..Thank you for stopping by.........Smiles
  1. Date: 7/31/2012 9:23:00 AM

    congrats Sharon on a brilliant write and win luv.. hope u have been well.. I am dealing with a variety of health issues these days but tryung my best to write on PS.. and stay in contact with my lovely friends luv..

    Ruebel Avatar Sharon Ruebel Date: 8/3/2012 7:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you honey for your read and you always kind remarks.... Smiles
  1. Date: 7/31/2012 7:53:00 AM

    adorable kind of waiting, sharon.. congrats on your superb win.. :) huggs!

    Ruebel Avatar Sharon Ruebel Date: 8/3/2012 7:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Nette, Thank you for reading me hon and always leaving such nice comments.....Lov, Shar
  1. Date: 7/31/2012 6:28:00 AM

    "With all my heart my love I send"...Wonderful piece,Sharon...I love this Line...Congratulations on your well deserved win...XOXO...

    Ruebel Avatar Sharon Ruebel Date: 8/3/2012 7:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Olusequn, Thank you for reading me and for leaving such a nice comment....Smiles
  1. Date: 7/31/2012 1:41:00 AM

    Congratulations Sharon, I hope the waiting ends soon xx

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 12:38:00 AM

    Congrats on your big win Sharon...much enjoyed your poem.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 6:44:00 PM

    Heartbreaking, Sharon...congrats on your wonderful win with this poignant write! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 3:31:00 PM

    congrats on your win Sharon

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 2:50:00 PM

    Sharon congrats on your win, sad tale..David

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 2:30:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 4:02:00 PM

    A touch of sadness amidst once a happy time..Enjoyed reading this eve..If for the contest, reads like winning material..Good luck in the contest..Sara

    Ruebel Avatar Sharon Ruebel Date: 7/27/2012 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Sara, Thank you for your lovely comments, yes my love has gone now but I know I will see him again someday. Hope you are well and having a beautiful Summer. Love, Shar