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  1. Date: 8/29/2012 2:45:00 PM
    One of my faves. Tears are such a powerful motivator for poetry. Don't forget your space after commas.

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 3:24:00 AM
    A very powerful write with a powerful title Yas....good luck if for a contest.

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 12:00:00 PM
    well, dear friend, you better stay out of that traffic as much as possible. I do not envy you. Here in my state it is not so bad but I feel really sorry for my husband having to drive truck in places like LA. I was just going off here and saw your comment. I think I will relax now with trying to compose a poem, maybe watch tv. No "good" friday movie for me today. Taking the grandkids to a kiddie movie this evening!

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 8:14:00 PM
    When will they ever learn? Nice poem! Peace &l Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 4:30:00 PM
    Indeed dearest Yasman things now days are black and dark....Hope must be included in our future for sure. Wonderful write here hon. Lov, Shar

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 4:29:00 PM
    searing read yet beautifully rendered with defines poetic tones, my mareey!.. best winning luck.. soupy mail later!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 3:23:00 PM
    GREAT way to do the theme and to show a Tetractys, Yasmin. Yes, these are the reason for so many tears in our world today.(sorry you are in the dumps!)

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 1:52:00 PM
    Very good Tetractys here by you Yas!Love it1Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 11:46:00 AM
    This is such a true write my friend! It is sad when there is the loss of life in any form! You've covered this reason to weep very well Yasmin! A very good and significant poem! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 11:36:00 AM
    If the world would only see...Nice write! Thou sad but true..

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 9:45:00 AM
    You`re right on with these words today,dear Yassy.Hope you`re doing fine and have a great day:) Take Care Always,Arild

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 6:30:00 AM
    so true...nicely penned Yasmin