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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 3:36:00 PM
    wow, David, practice is making you perfect! I love how this seems to have two different meanings, passion as well as real rain being wished for. Wonderful!

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 2:16:00 PM
    An excellent write here David!A winner sure.Enjoyed very much.

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 1:36:00 PM!!! heated me right UP ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 12:45:00 PM
    Love it! I concur with Ilene! Wonderful write David. :) Tanya ps. have you tried the mice yet?

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 12:11:00 PM
    nice one, david! i love the connection between missing someone and the parched weather, with the return and the deluge coming together. very poetic!

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 11:54:00 AM
    ummmm...another good one...David...well ya, Cap'n deb

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 11:21:00 AM
    This is quite the beautiful write my friend! I love how she become the deluge when she's with you, in your arms! And this is a perfect poem because the country needs a lot of rain right now for the drought is becoming immense! And the need for love is just as immense I must say! Fabulous piece David, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 10:23:00 AM
    I can relate to the emotion set here.Great lines~Thank you David for your comment on my recent win!

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 4:57:00 AM
    Where have you been living? praying for rain you must have meant for some poor parched country we have just finished with our wellies. Thanks for you comments I am blocked from the blogs page at the moment due to a system error, or someone has caught up with me... ha ha like this bty ., keep in touch xx