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Elusive Peace

When We live On this earth And value each Stranger as a dear Future friend, and extend That truth to all life with minds And souls, then perhaps lonely earth, Will experience elusive peace And fill the needy yearning of us all.

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  1. Date: 10/4/2012 11:57:00 AM

    Nicely done - great example of the form.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 9:54:00 PM

    Wow. I love this. Can't agree more with the message. My you have a way with words. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 2:37:00 PM

    Great thoughts penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..The design looks almost like a Christmas Tree..The great present would be peace ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 7:18:00 AM

    a heartfelt and bittersweet song filled with longing, brenda... may peace truly live among us...endearing!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 11:07:00 PM

    Brenda, your beautiful works satiate some of that need I have in my Soul- You are so special - unselfish - powerful concept,that Earth is lonely despite "all the goings on"- with respect, J.A.B.

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 6:09:00 PM

    so true! Glad you came home to us. Light & Love

    Atry Avatar Brenda Atry Date: 7/27/2012 6:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    HUGS TO YOU! I missed you all...I am finally rising out of the chaos...How are you Deb?,,I have really missed you the most (OOOOOH, I do not want to get in trouble for this), but you are my girl! You rally for me when I'm down, no better mentorhere than you...
  1. Date: 7/26/2012 12:09:00 PM

    Well done Brenda.....sweet and lovely !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 8:23:00 PM

    A lovely message, Brenda. Nice etheree. Love, Kim