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Not the Same

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Not the Same

You took the small change from my pocket
Skimmed the surface of my mind
You didn't know my glass was empty 
When you raised yours to better times 
You couldn't see that I was fading 
Falling deep inside myself
Letting go, deteriorating 
You never saw inside my hell
You grabbed my shirt when I walked out 
I spun around and shook you off 
You told yourself that you could help
That you could make me what I'm not 
And I think we can agree 
That you were better off that day
Because the man that you once loved
Was not the man who walked away 

By: Kyle Ezra Kriticos 

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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 5:37:00 AM
    Sad one Kyle but very well done xx

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 5:23:00 PM
    sad write Kyle