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Rain

Standing here by the door 
While I watch the rain just poor 
It is splashing on the ground as the rain
Drops come down even more
I decide to walk around in the rain 
Hoping to see a rainbow
Even if I don’t I know it won’t be long
Untill the sun will comes out 
And drys this all up
And I will sit out side
Watching the clouds roll by
And as the sun set changes colors
Knowing soon it will go and hide
And when morning arrives 
I will watch the morning sun come out to play
As it gets ready to heat up this beautiful summer day
And I will sit out side latter on that night
Watching the clouds roll by
And as the sun set changes colors

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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 12:07:00 AM

    This is very nice, Jane. Telling us just how you love the rain and watching nature's colors!

    Kostman Avatar Jane Kostman Date: 7/26/2012 10:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your comment on my poem ! Yes I love the rain and it tis a blessing to have rain when it is soo hot! Jane XoXo
  1. Date: 7/25/2012 2:15:00 PM

    *.* Tis A Lovely Wonderful Familiararity Amid Your Precious Voice & I Remember Seeing A Rainbow Just A Couple Of Days Past Although There Were No Rain That Day & It Seemed As Though Wishing To Wrap Itself About The Sun & I Thought How Beautiful This Sight I Have Not Seen In A Bit ˜ There To Remind Of Both The Beauty & The Glory From Upon High; Kind Of Like This Splendours Glimpse Into These Eyes Beyound The Mundane, Jaded & Night So To Speak; Very Nice ... My Luv. Tristen *.*

    Kostman Avatar Jane Kostman Date: 7/25/2012 4:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I sure love the rain and the rainbows in the sky are magical..... We seen one here in Colorado Springs about 2 weeks ago it was so big and so tall and just looked as if you could reach out and touch it. Thank you jane xoxo
  1. Date: 7/25/2012 1:02:00 PM

    Lovely poem Jane. check soup mail. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce

    Kostman Avatar Jane Kostman Date: 7/25/2012 4:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your comment on my poem hope you have a wonderfull day! Jane xoxo