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  1. Date: 9/19/2012 11:04:00 PM
    great poem David ,,,, have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:04:00 PM
    ha...I'm not gonna peek...I'm not gonna peek.... to late... this reminds me..I have a contest to close.... xox~ TEX...

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 1:13:00 AM
    Regarding the poor la cocka roacha in your shoe-a! CRRRRUNCH!!!! write, thanks. gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 1:03:00 PM
    David, it's like a roller coaster of emotions that many of us can relate to... the ending is such a clever twist...thoroughly enjoyed..gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 12:48:00 PM
    good luck in the contest. very well written!

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 9:41:00 AM
    Brilliant write, so true among us all. Everyone feels at some time in their life the desire to give up. Love the ending! Thank-you for sharing!~Tammy~

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 11:37:00 PM
    wow, this is superb, David. You are on a roll recently, coming up with some very inspired poetry. One of the best I've seen in this particular contest!

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 6:18:00 PM
    It started on a sad note of of self condemnation and self doubts, but then the power of His magnificent love became apparent and drew you back from the brink of destruction. Great story David and I love the outcome. Thanks for commenting on my poems. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 3:26:00 PM
    This is, wow, what a change of feeling in your write! I really enjoyed the furthest pits of hell climbing to the highest realms of heaven! This is an exemplary poem my friend! I really enjoyed the twist you gave from one extreme to the next! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 12:32:00 PM
    This is pretty awesome David, you manage to make me smile tonight with your ending.. Sincerely hope this makes it to PD's winner's list.. As for me running around naked on the beach? As soon as Summer shows her pretty face over here that's the first thing I'll do lol ;) btw "shackled" was just my weird inspiration not personal.. Love Wilma

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 12:31:00 PM
    ohhhh...gifted well done...thank you...Cap'n deb

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 11:00:00 AM
    Ver well written poem...makes one contemplate

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 10:58:00 AM
    This one leaves questions..It should be a good one for the contest..Winners' circle for sure...Good luck in PD contest...Thanks for stopping by with congrats.Sara