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HEAT

Flies, drawn to their only sustenance, cloud around my head.
In this cloudless desert sky  - blank, deep-arching cavern of thought  - 
Unblinking  sun stares down but this fire-bird will not fly,
Has no hope of rain or shade to hide or die.  
Searing sand burns my toes, grills my heels, wind blows in flies, in eyes.
Lips crack to blisters   - they parch.  Meant to be moist, they roast  
My fever, worsening and wakening  a hell of hallucinations.

I am again sweating in the kitchen in McDonalds in Phoenix,  
An unblinking boss staring without sympathy 
At the boiling water and grilled meat :  
When I burnt an arm on the deep fat frier, my skin stuck to metal pan.
These shoes’ rubber soles melt and stick to rocks as I teeter
And lose balance, my tee shirt hot to the skin,
While I hallucinate and start to lose the struggle with 
These endless wavescapes  poured out with boiling hot sand.  

My feverish scalp faces the unblinking Doctor Mengele’s  scalpels
Which further probe the agony of helplessness :
Even scarabs have long abandoned this place
Which arabs once knew, but now never visit  : the wilderness,
A place of uncertain mirages, illusions
With horizontal slices of land and sky, sand and fly,  
All scalpel-dissected by the furious heat of the desert furnace  

Watch the children of Hiroshima as it bursts asunder Gomorrah-like
Till only a parchment picture remains of the desolation,
The deep cavern, of hopeless, limitless, heat without any  abyss-end. 
Stare  at the fireball  with the last sight of evaporating eyes.
Jump into canal without sonde, blindly boiling bodies in its dead water .
Send me water!  It floats drinkingly before Tantalus’s fly-swarmed eyes,
Scanning the dry ocean’s endless waves of dessication,     
Around the ruins of some Moorish fortress half-buried in sand,
And the ruins of Hiroshima’s incinerated desolation,  where 
The only things standing, rising phoenix-like after the fireball ,
are the  Golden Arches  of Auschwitz.

Notes:
Tantalus - a mythical figure condemned to be surrounded by water but not able to drink.
Dr. Mengele - an infamous doctor in Auschwitz who experimented on people.
The Moors, -  the original people inhabiting Morocco, abandoned many buildings in the Sahara desert.
Hiroshima - the target of the world’s first nuclear  attack.
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Written by Sydney Peck   25  July  2012
Entered  in  Debbie Guzzi ‘s  Contest     HEAT

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  1. Date: 8/4/2012 9:08:00 AM
    Wow......I hardly know what to say......you have left me speechless .......taking this word Heat...beyond anyone's expectation.

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Debbie''s "Heat" contest Sidney. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 2:41:00 PM
    Sidney congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 8:42:00 AM
    This poem is a fire ball Sidney, shooting heat from side to side, enjoyed it with eyes wide open this morning, congrats on your 1st place win, love vie

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:51:00 AM
    Hot one here Sidney, congratulations on your well deserved win xx

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 6:44:00 AM
    Wow !! Powerful poem !! Congratulations on your first place in Debbie's contest !!

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 4:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your first place. This is a great write. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 3:36:00 AM
    You're hot! This is a phenomenal hit err heat! =)

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 6:39:00 PM
    Obviuosly!!! No one could get HOTTER than THIS..now see what you can do Syd ;) I loved the stream of consciousness feel to the Free Verse, and I adored the intellect of it all..no Straw man here. Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 4:47:00 AM
    Wow, that's all I can say I'm in a sweat treading it, or that could be my age. Have seen your comment on my blog but i am not able to get on there now with a system error but I wanted to say it was an Irishman that gave me the joke. There were a lot of Irish while I was on holiday and they are such a good natured and funny friendly group xx

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 3:08:00 PM
    Oh yeah you gave us HEAT [and DARK!] nice and meaty too! ;) Light & Love

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 7/25/2012 3:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yup nettiekins HM new full well what Syd can do he just has to be reminded on occasion ;)
  1. Date: 7/25/2012 2:49:00 PM
    This is so heart felt..and , this may not be the correct word..clever...it made my head swim..Its sure to do well in the contest. BG

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 12:36:00 PM
    hallucinating in a stream of frenzied images, KC, thus, allowing me to experience your poetic range… i taught you well, jedi, lol... the master is nodding!...the joker in me rears!... raise debbie's roof!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 12:06:00 PM
    Wow!Excellent poem here Syd!