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I MISS YOU


a portion of courage is leading me,
i have written enough letters,
if you hear these solemn words know its me,
the sun has scotched all the nectar.

am surrounded by an outwit debt of promise,
that to the grave my heart will still keep,
and as dew starts to form on my eyes,
... i know you too will keep.

how do i say i miss you,
when each time you call i sink into idle tears,
the sensation in your voice,
and the images of your beauty seem to sever for years.

i wish i'd see the garden of flowers in your eyes,
maybe the rock of truth will sink,
that the new skins on my broken heart is a world of lies,
and is ending in the next blink.

i cant lie that i am ok,
when a deep loneliness has swept me,
come and be by me, my love,
and complete my world....


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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:36:00 AM

    You bring it all out in you blessed rhyme Brian, very moving and emotional piece. keep writing -Lucas-

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 12:20:00 PM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Brian. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 07/26/2012