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In the left field

lie down
                 look up
                 from
below
take 
              a
              horizontal
view
from
the
           side
underneath
from
above
            close up
            zoom in
telescope
the mind's
                                  eye
                 to 
                 a
                 new
view
on life
            nature
            others
and
you



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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 12:35:00 PM

    Yes, I see what you mean about spacing out the words rather than using punctuation. i will have to try using this method.

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 7:29:00 PM

    A cool poem, Brian. I like the title of it too. With the double meaning it has.

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 9:16:00 AM

    The artist is at work here enjoyed your poem Brian have a great day, hugs vie