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Praying and hoping--

We are all fervently waiting Dear open your sleepy eyes Wake up from your slumber Please heed to your mother's cries Dear open your sleepy eyes We know you wanted some rest Please heed to your mother's cries See, we are receiving guests We know you wanted some rest This hospital is not the place See we are receiving guests Just wish to see your smiling face This hospital is not the place This monitor, the tubes and drips Just wish to see your smiling face Release anxiety's vice like grip This monitor, the tubes and drips Get up golden boy, go from here Release anxiety's vice like grip Talk to us and dispel our fears Get up golden boy, go from here Wake up from your slumber Talk to us and dispel our fears We are all fervently waiting 25/7/2012

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  1. Date: 8/1/2012 5:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Lisa's "One Silver Tear" contest Yesha. Love, Carol Prayers are being sent.

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 10:22:00 PM

    YESHA., a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS in LISA'S' contest..... always~ PD

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 9:28:00 AM

    Congratulations Yesha, on a wonderful write and 3rd place win. My thoughts and prayers are with him and family. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 6:46:00 AM

    congrats Yesha on this stunning write and win .. touching as tears flow luv.. an amazing piece..

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 4:45:00 AM

    So moving write Yesha, hope it goes well. - Congrats on you win! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 3:22:00 AM

    inspite of all the tension you wrote a very moving and heartfelt pantoum Yesha,you are truly a very gifted writer,congrads again on this win.

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 10:57:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Yesha. I'm sorry to hear about your young cousin. My prayers go out to him and your family. Love and Blessings

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 9:26:00 AM

    This is a heart-wrenching write, Yesha, especially since it's a true story. I pray for his healing. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 4:17:00 AM

    Yesha, congrats on your win, excellent..my prayers and thoughts are with him and you...David

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 12:47:00 AM

    congrads on a brilliant win Yesha

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 5:50:00 AM

    how is he,inbox me when you have time...hope all is well..

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 1:32:00 PM

    Such a good use of your fine poetry, we can all read it aloud and ask for help for your family. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 11:40:00 PM

    Oh, my, it's a REAL story. I must add him to my prayer list. The cousin of Yesha, may God be with him!

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 11:54:00 AM

    I am glad to see you have done a Pantoum so perfectly.Many poets here do not try this form.This is one of my Fav.Form.

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 11:52:00 AM

    So sorry to know this.My prayer is with your cousin.Hope everything will be Ok..

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 10:55:00 AM

    Thanks for stopping by with congrats..I have prayed for this sick loved one..God can where man can't....Great work to let us know..Sara

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 6:12:00 AM

    what happened Yesha?inbox me on facebook please,when you can...we are praying ,don't you worry..