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Live A Life

What is it that you want

What am i suppossed to do

The sounds of pain and sadness

When i speak to you

The grinding of the bones

and the tearing of the flesh

The empty room of a soul

thrown out with the rest

Looking through eyes of darkness

Its a shame they're so transfixed

Blocking out any goodness

Wondering why it's missed

The sun can still shine on your face

but not in your darkened room

it's seems you like your torture chamber

Never leaving seems much to soon

I don't think i will ever understand it

Even in my moments of pain

Screaming for help so loudly

but so comfortably in vien

I hope you can find the latter

If you listen you just may see

Swimming in a pool of hatred

Is nowhere life can be

The poison you swallow is thick

and cuts you open like a rusty knife

I pray someday you'll be rid of it

so you can finally Lead A Life.

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  1. Date: 7/25/2012 2:41:00 AM

    Hi Billy, Welcome to P-Soup! - Hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry - write, read and comments. - We are a big poetry family. - You write so good, I like it a lot. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)

    bier Avatar billy bier Date: 7/25/2012 3:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much. Its very new to me. I just have a lot on my mind and hope that this will help rid me of it. Im glad you think its good. I wanted to see what other poets thought. Im just a guy, trying my hand at this for the first time.