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Disquieting Tears

Emotional rush when quite hearts tear
leaving a void onerous to repair.
Unloving compassion torments me so
drowns benevolent heart to overflow.  

Hiding in shadows with a want to kill
forsakes a doubtful soul to grasp this thrill.
Understanding cannot be understood
when selfish being declines to do good.

Tears stain soft cheeks on a cold hard pillow
flow out of control like stormy billow.
A bruised heart shatters when a killer takes
one or multitude my heart still aches.

Copyright © 2012 By Caryl S. Muzzey
Written: 7/24/12

Second Place Winner ~ "One Silver Tear” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Lisa Cooper
July 27, 2012





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  1. Date: 8/1/2012 5:43:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Lisa's "One Silver Tear" contest Caryl. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 10:21:00 PM

    CARYL., a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS in LISA'S' contest..... always~ PD

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 6:44:00 AM

    congrats Caryl on a fabulous write and win .. very touching luv..

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 10:45:00 PM

    Congrats on your deserving won, Caryl, with your heartbreaking wrote. Love and Blessings

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 9:12:00 AM

    Caryl, congrats on your win with this moving piece! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 4:14:00 AM

    Caryl, congrats on your win, excellent..David