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Willow's Bend

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Willow's Bend

A willow's branch sways in the wind,
and waves goodbye to her old friend.
As if to lift in some odd way,
my spirits on this final day,
when I must leave her in the bay,
and take my children from their play.
For in the valley...as they say,
you can visit...never stay
So thank you willow, you did lend,
your time to us, on Willow's Bend.

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  1. Date: 3/28/2013 11:50:00 AM

    Hey Caleb, the title of this piece is incredibly evocative for me, and the content is wistful and written very, very well! I also want to say thanks for your comment on my poem about the fish and the kids and the water. I am so happy you found that connection; I can't think of many other times that were as special to me as going fishing off the docks with my dad.

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 2:23:00 AM

    Wonderful rhyme and rhythm, content, flow and excellent message. Enjoyed reading this very much!

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 2:01:00 PM

    hi,, stopping by to see how you've been... hoe you come back and post a new poem.. xox~pd

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 1:45:00 PM

    Like the flow and descriptiveness of this one..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 10:47:00 AM

    A well deserved placement for you in the Duo-Rhyme contest. Congratulations Caleb. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 12:40:00 PM

    An amazing write, Caleb, so thoughtful and serene! I have a great love for Willow trees and this poem goes to my fav's...Congrats on your wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 10:50:00 AM

    congrats on your win Caleb

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 2:26:00 AM

    Caleb congrats on your win, great image...David

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 1:08:00 AM

    Caleb, Your lovely poem blooms like a red rose among a bouquet of gardenia's, though their fragrance is also heavenly, yours takes center stage. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 7:08:00 PM

    Hey, so this is yours!! I am finally seeing who wrote the winning poems in my contest and I am happy to see you made my list because I always enjoy your poetry, Caleb. I love willow trees! Congratulations on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 4:46:00 PM

    enchanting is the word, caleb.. i enjoyed the personification of the willow, and the way the whole piece floats.. just darn sensitive.. best of luck with huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 7:18:00 PM

    Your poem has a very enduring visual image... a very beautiful poem... xox~pd

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 2:57:00 PM

    Again, great flow and rhyme. A winner I'm sure. Good luck. :) Tanya