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Love's Journey

Love’s Journey

Cherry blossoms floated pink
Concocting love in a drink
The day we met…
Holding time upon the brink
(Future and the Past in sync)
As in a net
We drank the love with each blink
And passing glance—scared to think
Of it—and yet,
Licking hands of time were set
Devouring with regret,
The morning dew…
But with each dance, somehow, let
Blossom, love, and passion get
Entwined anew
And there drink—‘less we forget
In noon day sun—when we met—
How blossoms flew.
Now as stars on purple hue
Contrast pinks for me and you 
And petals fall…
A comet hails from the blue
Regaling the love we knew—
A fireball—
Bright hot blaze, still burns for you,
Held in time’s conundrum flue…
You’re still my all.

deborahburch©
07/24/2012

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  1. Date: 8/19/2012 1:37:00 PM

    This poem has love written all over it, Im quite young but hope to find someone who makes me feel this way. Love this poem!

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 6:16:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Virelai" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 9:57:00 PM

    congrats on your win Deb

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 4:36:00 PM

    Fabulous, Deb!! Passionate, Romantic, just love it... congrats on your wonderful win (much higher on my list) Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 11:34:00 AM

    Love this Deborah!!!Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 9:44:00 AM

    Congratulations on a lovely poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 9:37:00 AM

    A colorful winning poem - congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 9:20:00 AM

    daintily crafted, deborah.... applause to you for the win!..: huggs!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 5:49:00 AM

    congratulations on this super win Debs xx

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 4:20:00 AM

    Cap'n Deb, huge congrats on your win, the flow of this is just wonderful, as well as the message, well done...David

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 10:16:00 AM

    Passionate,wonderful and a very big thanks for sharing this fireball with us,Deborah:) Have a great day over there! Hugs and Love,Arild

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/24/2012 10:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    awww...thank you sooooo much Arild my friend!!! I am deeply touched...God bless you and Anne-Lise...I love you both...huggss, deb
  1. Date: 7/24/2012 9:56:00 AM

    Enjoyed this one another good one deb xx

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/24/2012 10:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Thank you ~GG~ love you...hope all is well ...miss you...deb
  1. Date: 7/24/2012 9:48:00 AM

    Very passionate poem here by you Deb!Enjoyed very much!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/24/2012 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ;) thank you dear Kash!!(for everything) love ya, deb
  1. Date: 7/24/2012 9:40:00 AM

    *.* Sooo Beautiful Is The Pure Veins In Perfect Love's Meant To Be's, Beautiful Deborah ˜ A Very Wonderful Verse Which Hearts Can Only Hope & Pray Shall Extend Its Beauty Beyound The Ends Of Endless Time Unto The Streets Of Everlasting Splendours & Gold .... My Luv to You, Tristen *.*

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/24/2012 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for your inspiring words of kindness Tristen...love, deb
  1. Date: 7/24/2012 9:37:00 AM

    smitten by the blaze of your images, deborah... gawdd, i like the treatment of your theme.. wow!..:) huggs!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/24/2012 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh Nette!! thank you sooo very much!!! you bring tears to my eyes with your kindness...love you bunches...deb
  1. Date: 7/24/2012 9:34:00 AM

    Just beautiful Deborah. Love it!!! Love, Gail

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/24/2012 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) thank you sooooo much Gail...your comments and praise mean soooo much to me...thank you...love you bunches!! deb