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The Bluest Sky


Searching for sparrrows in the bluest sky, I tossed my heartache into the wind. Then, from the blue, to my dismay, the cold wind blew it back again. On Heaven's breath, my wide eyes saw a sparrow and a friend, and a voice called from bluest sky forgive and make amends.

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  1. Date: 8/1/2012 5:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "#192" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 12:42:00 AM

    CONGRATULATIONS,,, with your awesome win...xox~PD

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 10:25:00 PM

    RHONDA..I love YOUR AWESOME WIN..., a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS...GOODNIGHT;-) PD

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 7:03:00 PM

    Congrats. on you 1st place winner. A wonderful msg. enclosed within Anne

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 1:39:00 PM

    Congrats on your 1st place win - JH

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 9:38:00 AM

    Congratulations Rhonda, on a wonderful write and 1st place win. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 6:48:00 AM

    I guess this means don't bring your petitions b4 heaven until your own issues are dealt with...this is a great image to convey the spiritual message...Very amazed at its beauty! gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 6:39:00 AM

    This poem holds breathtaking beauty in imagery and essence, Rhonda, congrats!

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 4:55:00 PM

    congrats on your first place finish Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 2:47:00 PM

    Not only a beautiful poem in lovely description, but a wonderful message to hold! Perfectly done, Rhonda!

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 1:28:00 PM

    congrats!!! keep up the good wook! :)

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 1:07:00 PM

    Rhonda congrats on another win, your pen is flowing very nicely here,,,David

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 1:07:00 PM

    Great poem!

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 9:30:00 AM

    a powerful piece Rhonda.. the last line serves us all so well luv.. forgiveness is the start of blessings galore.. luv this one..

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 4:50:00 PM

    Wonderful life lesson on forgiveness, Rhonda...a true gem - Tim

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 11:25:00 PM

    Cute poem wid so much of depth

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 7:11:00 PM

    This is a wonderful poem, Rhonda! I enjoyed reading it very much. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 5:55:00 PM

    what a lovely message inside this little gem, Rhonda. Much enjoyed!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 3:29:00 PM

    This is such a true write my friend! I believe what you have said wholeheartedly! I really enjoyed what you have written! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:24:00 PM

    Hi Rhonda great touching write going to my favs, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 11:07:00 AM

    Rhonda my friend...beautiful again!!!! :) -oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 10:59:00 AM

    This is a beautiful piece, Rhonda. I am going to save it on my favorites list and show it to my wife...she will LOVE it!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 10:25:00 AM

    This touches the heartstrings as he is penned with such peace and beauty. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 9:01:00 AM

    not only is this dreamy, it's heavenly...enjoyed the flow and content of the work, rhonda.. well woven message of love and forgiveness!... :) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 8:26:00 AM

    Straight from the heart to our eyes, well done Rhonda, have a blessed day love vie