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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:26:00 PM
    Congrats, Yasmin. Excellent write. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 11:45:00 PM
    Congrats on your win with this heartfelt poem - JH

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 7:16:00 PM
    I pray you wait no more from your desire to Gods ears, congrats on your special win, my precious Jewelita xxx

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 8:50:00 PM
    Hi Yasmin.. CONGRATULATIONS, with this awesome poem about YOU :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 10:02:00 AM
    This so reflects what I have to say.yj6

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 11:33:00 AM
    A very nice write here Yas! It is a bit sad.... :o( But you are strong! Always look forward to the light that shines on you... :o)

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 12:44:00 PM
    Very heartfelt write here Yasmin..glad to come back to read your work..excellent look from deep within your soul!!

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 4:39:00 AM
    A heartfelt write Yas, in the lovely form of a sonnet. I am late by a day in commenting I see, I was so busy yesterday, fussing over princess!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 8:11:00 PM
    You have your priorities proper & patient Yasmin - God should be honored for such sanguine sacrafice - some one,somewhere,somehow is suffering worse - to appreciate life one should be a little masochistic - tastey rythemn & rhyme - J.A.B.

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 7:41:00 PM
    Yasmin, room is filled with UNICORN stuff animals... They keep me company... and guess what I'm too old for bed time stories..((LOL)) your like *Yeah right!! Okay, every now and than i get pampered ... The best foot massage and thigh rub... And this puts me to sleep... I only get this every time, i want to fall in to a deep deep sleep... My favorite old bed time story is... ~Little red riding hood... How about you?? What's your favorite bed time story....xox~pd

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 7:25:00 PM
    Hello, Yasmin,,, been trying to catch up on my sleep... but tonight,, i will not you know you can't keep a lady waiting... This is a very nice poem to enter in Susan's contest..... stopping by to say hi & good night. well not really good night... ha ha.. xox~PD

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 6:08:00 PM
    Those last lines are very creative, Yasmin. to say it as joys frugality as you watch from afar from fortune's frivolity. I hope life's joys will be much more than "frugal" when they catch up to you, sweetie!!!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 3:44:00 PM
    That's life, huh. Thanks for reading my stuff. I always enjoy yours very much. daver

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 3:25:00 PM
    Sweet write my friend! I really enjoyed your creative piece here! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 1:23:00 PM
    Hi Yas, this is a really graceful sonnet, with a good message, well done..David

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:52:00 PM
    Hi Yasmin you have done it again great write of faith, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 11:56:00 AM
    Love this one Yasmin, beautiful poem. - Thank you for congrats on my - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 9:05:00 AM
    An excellent write Yasmin!Love it!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 8:34:00 AM
    such a glorious devotional ,mareey.. you held me divinely captivated!... winning material is what priya predicts.. a beauty like you!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 7:11:00 AM
    Oh blessed be my dearest for writing such treasures, as so you speaketh out of the mouth of pureness from your lips to God's ears, to my heart to adhere this message, he loves you with an abundance and a passion only reserved for tender hearts such as yours. in you he is well pleased, my love always, Vie. This is such an honest revealing prayer to our maker, how can he refuse,GRACE!