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Spring Kisses

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Spring Kisses

Sweet honeysuckle
Springs on the lips of lovers
The taste of sugar

*Caleb Smith--7-23-12--

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  1. Date: 3/21/2013 12:27:00 PM
    Yummy..yowza..I love haiku and i love this one

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 3:10:00 AM
    Deeply enjoyed...

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 8:08:00 PM
    Hi Caleb, thank you for clearing up the little misunderstanding... your the best... SOUP-MAIL...linda

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:08:00 PM
    I'm sad I am blocked from your poems...:-(

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 2:54:00 PM
    Definitely lovely Caleb! I love the image of the honeysuckle in relation to lips ... inviting. Very nice!

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 6:34:00 PM
    Thanks for the sweet compliment on my haiku [I do not consider myself a master hon..I feel I may be a few paces out of the category of supermarket haiku in Japan BUT I have gotten better LOL]..your verse above has lines 1 & 2 pretty correct for a traditional haiku, it is that line 3 that's VERY difficult to grasp what to do with it has taken me years,

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 9/1/2012 6:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    what you did above is called cause and effect..you said the honeysuckle was sweet so it is no surprise it tastes like sugar aye? The fragmented line WITH the juxtaposed INPUT [visual, auditory, tactile etc] needs to ADD to the image be related to it, connect to it conceptually BUT add ..AAAAAAHA!!
  1. Date: 8/9/2012 10:10:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Caleb!!! - This haiku is so sweet - lovely "Spring Kisses" - well written. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 11:10:00 AM
    Thank you for your support of my contest and congratulations on your well deserved win Caleb. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 8:41:00 PM
    nice poem about lips.

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 11:48:00 PM
    AHA and there it is. Congratulations. That was funny what your dad said. I used Gag as my first rhyming word in the maggot poem. I forgot to put my name on my lips poem so I didn't get placed. I felt so disappointed. I hate when I don't even see the rules!!

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 5:07:00 PM
    ((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 3:55:00 AM
    Caleb super congrats on your win, excellent write..I like the short and sweet one's...David

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 7:38:00 PM
    Sweet Haiku Caleb...congrats on your win. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 7:17:00 PM
    Hi Caleb, sweet as sweet can be... sugar on the lips... a nice luscious haiku..... stopping by to say hi & good night... xox~PD

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 6:15:00 PM
    IN which contest did this win, Caleb? sweet as can be!!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 5:09:00 PM
    Congrad's on your fine write winning. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:22:00 PM
    I love this Haiku :-) Congratulations on your win. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 11:13:00 AM
    A sweet haiku. I love it!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 6:19:00 AM
    Oh how sweet it is...Have you ever tasted the nectar of HoneySuckle?...Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick
    Date: 7/24/2012 6:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Caleb, Thanks for stopping by..Sara
  1. Date: 7/23/2012 2:15:00 PM
    A 'sweet' haiku. :) Tanya