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  1. Date: 8/10/2012 8:00:00 AM
    Congratulations on a terrific win.

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 6:59:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nathan's "Insanity Or Death" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 1:13:00 AM
    Yes, "there are no rules, except ...survival!" You got that spot on, David. Congratulations on your win. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:22:00 PM
    aweee David , a big congratulations in Nate's contest... his winners always seem to amaze.. i know how picky he is.... glad to see you here...pd

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:20:00 PM
    DAvid, I REALLY liked yours and am glad to see it made the list, right above little old me, who is on the bottom of the list.(but it's better than nothing) heehee. BIG congrats to you in the contest.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:09:00 PM
    congrats. Nate'

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 4:05:00 PM
    Hmmm.. she sund like a reeel beetch Good poem though "Even dead flowers have a fragrance" wow...freekin' awesome line dude

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 6:36:00 AM
    Looks like a winner to me, David! "There are no rules, except...survival!" Great imagey going here! Looks like it's time to tell those "demons" to bugger off!:) Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 4:10:00 AM
    Deep write I like it much :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 9:13:00 PM
    Hey, again we are on the same wave length posting poems for the insanity contest and it looks like you did insanity to darkness theme as well! I really like yours. You did a great job with it!

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 4:42:00 PM
    really well many adjectives that describe perfectly the sentiment you are trying to convey.....just one tip, you aren't the only one who, from birth, is headed for death.....unless i'm wrong and some people are immortal, or at least think they are....let the light of knowledge shine on this poem so all may read a moving piece be cool and be no one's phool PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 4:31:00 PM
    Like Russell i love the cage of flickering birds shadows ....the insanity comes free images to me ...bonfires of insanity...covered thee

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 3:18:00 PM
    An excellent entry...I can feel the insanity...Caleb

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 2:27:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your interesting work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 11:41:00 AM
    "Creating night-time shadows of a flock of caged birds inside my head" oh the insanity that this creates. I don't know if that is what you were referring to, but that is what I got out of that line! What an ingenious write this whole poem is! I am in awe with the vast impression that this piece leaves within me...I still get the insanity throughout...especially that caged birds line! Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 11:10:00 AM
    I like the dead flowers have a fragrance line. Sometimes I feel that I won't leave behind a single thing, not even a fragrance. Sometimes I don't want to. Just want to disappear.

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 11:08:00 AM
    [a flock of caged birds] does well discribe the flutter of the stomach as anxiety decends. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 7:52:00 AM
    Hi David very good write hope you survive to bring us more words of brilliance, all the bset in the comp, all the best owen

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 6:57:00 AM
    Very strong and and it scary, like it don't want to meet up with the demons in your mind though.xx