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Swinging On A Star

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Swinging On A Star

Swinging On A Star

Catching golden love,
These soft moonbeams in a jar,
You watch from above
As if swinging on a star--
"Memories”…of love…you are. 

deborahburch©
07/22/2012


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  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:42:00 PM

    Reminds me of the old Bing Crosby song about swinging on a star. Evocative work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/24/2012 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) thank you Matthew...I am honoured...love , deb
  1. Date: 7/24/2012 9:28:00 AM

    Hmmmm...beautiful!!!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/24/2012 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol ;) thank you Kash...sooo much!! love ya, deb
  1. Date: 7/22/2012 4:21:00 PM

    Cap'n Deb, this reminds me of the sixties song ( you are tooooo young to know about) Perry Como, oh I sudennly feel sooo old, I like it, good luck...David

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/22/2012 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL..."or would you rather be a mule..."? ;) you're not that old dear...and besides ...I like the oldies, too...lol...thank you sooo much...love ya, Cap'n deb
  1. Date: 7/22/2012 3:12:00 PM

    So sweet and moving poem Deborah. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/22/2012 3:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh thank you sooo much dear Anne-Lise!! hope you are doing well...love you bunches...deb
  1. Date: 7/22/2012 3:00:00 PM

    Touching piece. Hopefully we'll all be remembered in Love! Perfectly said Boo....

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/22/2012 3:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    awww, thanks sweet boo...sooo true...love ya, deb