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Swinging on a Star Tankas-3

“Swinging on A Star”-1

Oh “Bethlehem Star” 
Bright multi-faceted points
Still shimmer from far
Above my old aching joints
Reminding me of His love.

deborah burch©
07/22/2012

“Swinging On A Star”-2

Diamonds on blue
Yours glimmering by the moon
Is “Venus”…still true...
Holding your heart, as I croon
Sweet love songs in moonbeam hues.

deborah burch©
07/22/2012

“Swinging On A Star”-3

Catching golden love,
These moonbeams in a jar,
You watch from above
As if swinging on a star--
My "Mem'ry”…my love…you are. 

deborahburch©
07/22/2012

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  1. Date: 2/3/2013 5:24:00 AM

    these are wonderful Tankas, as i browse through your oldies...glad i did...

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 5:24:00 PM

    Just beautiful Deborah, great job!! Best wishes in Linda's contest. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 2:37:00 PM

    I like the last Tanka the best! It shows off a better display of love in my view! Great compilation of poems my friend! You've done an excellent job! Awesome Work!!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/22/2012 2:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you dear Russell...:) hope you are well...love ya, deb