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As happy as sharks in Hell

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As happy as sharks in Hell

A long journey, hot and sweaty
With thorns along the jetty
Pricking my body dangerously
I sat and pondered glumly
Hell is surely filled with demons 
Ready to give me lots of sermons
And reducing my dose of that love song
So that I drown, drowsy, all day long!

Miracle! Heaven and Hell so alike
No demons, hurling out, apelike!
Just an empty island, surrounded by sharks
They rode calmly as if in parks
Friendly and warm, they even wave
For sweets even if I do crave
I satisfied myself with that sweet wine
Intoxicated by those sharks in my confine!

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  1. Date: 8/9/2012 11:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "To Hell And Back" contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:25:00 PM
    Anoucheka congrats on your win, love it...David

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 12:52:00 AM
    Congrats on your wonderful win Anoucheka

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:35:00 PM
    ANOUCHEKA :-) , this has been my favorite contest out of all the ones I have sponsored this year.. Congratulations and thank you for the double journey... good night... XOX~ PD

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 5:14:00 AM
    its a wonderful poem . hope u keep on writing poems like this 1 .

    Gangabissoon Avatar Anoucheka Gangabissoon
    Date: 7/23/2012 6:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thks :)