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'Warfare'

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'Warfare'


Fighting the demons no one sees only you feel it eating away at your skin crawling in your veins where your blood use to reign supreme the tingling you feel is it just your imagination? I can see it in your eyes you are no longer who you were they have taken over possessed every inch of you try and fight the madness that’s not part of you No one will believe you just gave up without a fight don’t let them steal your last breath ©220720121025

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  1. Date: 7/23/2012 12:56:00 AM
    A very intense write here Wilma.. well scribed

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 1:33:00 PM
    Excellent!

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 12:06:00 PM
    Talk about an indepth view of a force taking over....this does it !! Powerful words !!

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 11:35:00 AM
    Wow, what an in depth study of possession! This is a wonderful write my friend, a glorious poem you've written! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 10:37:00 AM
    I dig it too, Wilma (looking at what someone commented down here) Is it perhaps for that contest on Insanity? It sure seems to fit it!!

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 6:20:00 AM
    I diig;) Sharon

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 5:56:00 AM
    Doing great,Wilma.Having a bit of the "holiday blues" right now,back to reality after 3 weeks of drifting around on a vacation cloud.Its been nice and relaxing:-)

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 4:28:00 AM
    Oh my..a very dramatic write from Cape Town this rainy morning:) Eating away at your skin,crawling in your veins..etc.Feel like am in the middle of a very scary movie while reading your work,Wilma:) Have a great Sunday,CTC-and hope you`re well..Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 4:24:00 AM
    Fight. Well said. Nice write. tfs

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 3:54:00 AM
    Never give up without a fight.... kill the demons!!! - Well done Wilma. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox love Anne-Lise