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Silent,loud,eternal poem

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Silent,loud,eternal poem

Silent. 
Like a feather floating to the 
ground. 
Silent. 
Like a candles flame in the wind.
Silent. 
Like death. 
Loud. 
Like thunder. 
Loud. 
Like sirens on a police car. 
Loud. 
Like a trumpet, blasting in your 
ear.  
Eternal. 
Like the twinkling stars. 
Eternal. 
Like A book waiting to be read. 
Eternal. 
Like night and day. 
Silent, loud, eternal. 

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  1. Date: 7/23/2012 5:25:00 PM

    great write Carmen,may your SILENT words become LOUD and last ETERNALLY

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 12:20:00 PM

    So sweet small written poem....like it. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 9:38:00 PM

    Sweet - like this poem.