Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership
Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

Trap In A Choice -

Justin Bordner Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Trap In A Choice - which was written by poet Justin Bordner. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Justin Bordner

Best Justin Bordner Poems

+ Fav Poet

Trap In A Choice -

You have stained stars in your eyes tonight,
a gold glitter asunder as vast as any Past
stuck fast on this moon light sight,
give me softly the sultry sigh of a woman's strong age,
I am not passing the page until the dire of dawn ushers me to the cage,
twinkles and sprinkles make for the tingles between you & I my Lady,
sparkles finite glow warm,
a silent swarm in thick air for our remote melody,
starvations lead to ovations from humbled hearts
searching blind for succulent cures
for a mad malady,
a kiss, calm as crystal and firm
like a promise pronounced proud
by a dreamy lover drives me happy,
 
My love, where are your  f---ing fangs & whispy wings,
clever you are,like fire on ice,
playing nice but in disguise
choosing random nights,
a fickle nightingale setting sail to numerous posts and ports,
swift as thunder with brief endearings,
vanishing like a whisk whisper
and laughing lovingly,sparingly spry,
the companionship provided is priceless
with a somber cost,
a Providential promiscuity true & dry,
your absence and unpredictability 
feeling cold as Aphrodite's icon
rough & rocky,
would Venus die, cry, or lie 
if asked ardently why
She consumes the blood of my heart,
pitfalls for passions, enticements for indictments of innocence,
woman this carnival shocks me silly,
never the less, the beauty of you is boundless,
consequence forever in a lingering fragrence,
like a confused comet
I volunteered my vitality for your invitation
to a sheltered rampart,
deny me what you will, charge me as much you can,
for I am enthralled
by this romance and Virtuoso's dance -

J.A.B.  2003

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 8/15/2014 6:04:00 AM
    There is beauty in all you write, Justin. Sometimes...it leaves one speechless, for what can one say to such beauty? It enthralls. "Woman, this carnival shocks me silly." It gave me an internal giggle...Loved that line. "The sultry sigh of a woman's strong age." Yes, woman...lose inhibitions as they age...and they become more giving. Lovely work, Justin. Thanks for all your visits to me....

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 8/15/2014 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You didn't quote the entire line Eileen, " Never the less, the beauty of you is boundless..." I love the way you give, and take, and play woman. Your body of work does the same to my senses. Genius loves Genius. J.A.B.
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 2:14:00 PM
    THIS IS AWESOME! Different from a lot of the work I have read on the soup, I love how unique and original you write! Loved it, I'm gonna check out more of your poetry! :)

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 10/31/2012 1:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Come back again Anne, it only gets better - I thank you for the love and curiosity - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 8/21/2012 2:36:00 PM
    Romantic and passionate. Oh yeah. You'll find her. ;) Haha Enjoyed the spectacular poem here. Will continue to read your masterpieces! Always, Laura

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 8/21/2012 8:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    As I will grow hungry for yours Laura - This poem was composed out of total instinct and angry love - thanks my friend - J.A.B.
  1. Date: 8/10/2012 9:30:00 PM
    Ahh...Justin...sharing the imaginations of your spirit and the varied tapestry of your musings- delights and tickles me with delightful sensations

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 8/10/2012 11:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Don't give me any ideas Anne - my poetry can be dangerous - thank you - J.A.B.
  1. Date: 8/9/2012 2:35:00 AM
    secret assignations... nice write - JH

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 8/9/2012 10:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sometimes my heart keeps secrets from me and poetry is the vehicle for the expression of the truth - thanks - J>A>B.
  1. Date: 7/22/2012 2:04:00 AM
    Justin, WOW!!! stained stars in the eye,,, now that's a very unique line.. gees~ Why did I not think of it? I love the eternal search feel in your poem. your poem alone is outstanding ~~ Just like the ending dance... xox~LINDA

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 7/22/2012 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm so very glad that we can share the star light Linda - The feeling is mutual regarding unique lines P.D. - sometimes I get lost in the foot steps Linda,but spirit such as yours comforts me - Neat analysis - J.A.B. % XOX
  1. Date: 7/21/2012 4:57:00 PM
    A very passionate and feeling poem, Justin. I enjoyed the read.

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 7/22/2012 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    When you are touched by my visions Andrea I feel as though I've lived well & true - J.A.B.
  1. Date: 7/21/2012 3:32:00 PM
    Ouf...your third eye feels to be charged and acutely discerning, Justin. Difficut to understand why your Lady would dance away without you.:( She sounds to be somewhat of a coward; not the "Warpath Woman" you so desperately need and desire? Still, I haven't heaps of knowledge nor wisdom to share.:( Romanticism at it's finest; enjoyed your write! Best wishes, Mikki

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 7/22/2012 10:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Maybe she knows something that I do not - Mikki you possess volumes of decisive & beautiful insight - you are a puzzle breaker - J.A.B.