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I am a hawk

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I am a hawk

I am a hawk,
I can see far away. 
I am a wolf,
Stalking it's prey. 
I am a rabbit,
Small and shy. 
I am a fox,
Quiet, and sly. 
I am a sloth,
Slow and steady.
I am a race horse,
Happy and ready. 
I am a bird,
Starting to sing. 
I am a bee,
Ready to sting. 
I am a horse,
Grazing on hay,
I am an owl,
At the end of the day.

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  1. Date: 7/21/2012 3:04:00 AM

    Nice one Carmen. It's interesting how you've used the different animals to show various charecteristics. Just lovely!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 6:49:00 PM

    great write Carmen